Eddie Davidson: Blog

If you follow my stories, and I have a storyline you suggest, offer me some feedback?

Is there an earlier story you want me to continue? If so suggest some ideas about where you'd like to see and go.

Three new ideas in the works;

1. Rob's daughter comes to him and asks for expensive acting lessons. Instead he offers The teach her himself. In the process, he suggest she acts like a slut around the house to convince her mom and the rest of the family that she is a bad girl. Sparks fly when the mom starts punishing the daughter.

2. Woman frequently cheats on her husband. He confronts her with the help of his daughter. She basically dares him to put her in her place at home.

3. A woman who is deeply racist and her daughter are taught a lesson by their neighbor. This would be a story focused heavily on BBC training. I'm not sure if the husband secretly enjoys it or is going to be more overt about insisting it happen.

I can't tell you too many more details without giving away the twists. Do any of those spark your fancy? New and different ideas?

I see a lot of Christmas/Thanksgiving/Halloween stories, but almost never hear of someone getting fucked on Saint Patty's day.

just an observation and a suggestion to write more filth and Erin Go Bragh (Less).

WITH RED HEADS!!

Finalizing chapter 10 now to finish strong in the "Keeping the Womenfolk in Line-Bible" story.

I wonder if anyone noticed the "Because of Winn Dixie" references?

EASTER EGGS:
Oscar Buloni (no my middle name is not "Meyer") - He shares his last name with Opal Buloni - the main character of "Because of Winn Dixie". I thought it would be clever if his first name was Oscar and that put a chip on his shoulder about the reference to Oscar Meyer Balogna.

The story is set in small town Florida - Just like Because of Winn Dixie. I had someone say "It is set in A small town" but in this context it is a setting like "The Wild West" or "Suburban Middle America" - if you lived in small town Florida you can picture the muggy heat, the rednecks, the old buildings, the gravel roads.

The name of the town is fictional - Naomi, Florida. It is the same town used in "Because of Winn Dixie"

Lastly, Opal's father is never named in the book (as far as I know) but the actor who played him (small town preacher with a church that shares space in a gas station) was Jeff Daniels and I chose to name him Jeff Buloni.

If you are wondering who that lovely lady in the opening picture is- she is an instagram/twitter model. BrittanyXoxO and she is just the peachiest, sweetest, nicest, most optimistic person possible. This was really a fan-fiction. I love how she is like "Hey, I am just me!" and always looking on the positive of everything. I wanted to capture that in the character in this story and hence the reason I named this character "Brittany"

She has this positive mom-energy that is so incredibly hot and pure. In no way am I attempting to claim that the character in the story IS BrittanyXOXO though - or that she shares any of the religious beliefs. She was just inspired by her.

The inspiration for Brittany in this story is an homage to a hot woman who shares so much of herself with the world. She does way more than post cute photos. She often posts really uplifting messages on her Twitter. That's something that I look forward too daily. I wanted to put that out there.

I am still not sure if Chapter 9 is going to be a mega-chapter or if I want to include Chapter 10 as an epilogue. I am working to ensure that it is not redundant and that the complete tale is told.

Feedback on the comments has been fairly negative at times. It's good to see that though as it is also constructive. You can't please all the people all of the time. One feedback was it seems like just when the story gets started I end it.

I disagree - that is actually part of what I am going for with a complete story. If you watched Star Wars and thought "well cool, death star blew up. I don't care what happens next" you wouldn't watch the other movies.

However, there is a complete arc at the end of Star Wars that tells an entire tale. It doesn't just stop mid-story.

What I am going for is a complete story but not a life story.

The difference is that in Star Wars - they did follow up (it took twenty+ years for most of that follow up). I don't always write sequels to my stories. I encourage people to give it a go and add a fanfiction continuation. This story certainly could be extended - what if the family goes on vacation - perhaps to Bible camp with just Heather, Jayne and Oscar attending for the summer?
How about a trip to Disneyworld? what would that be like? What happens after the marriage on the honeymoon?

What if we introduced Brittany's sister to the equation and she shows up with her son and new characters? All sorts of fun things.

That being said - this story will end within 2 chapters. I'm turning on voting now.

Lastly, I want to ask your opinion on my next project. It is a short fan-fiction based on a lesser known comedian. She's had comedy specials on TV, etc. I know people write about Brittany Spears and the like in fan fiction - what is your thoughts about a fan fiction story?

Would you prefer I just make her "similar" to the celebrity and generic the name? or would you prefer it be a fan fiction?

I've had the same thought about writing Goldbergs fan fiction. In my mind, they are perfect for a porno based on their lives. Just like Al Bundy of Married with Children would be. Kelly and Meg with a horny Bud Bundy - all sorts of fun storylines could be had.

Would it be better to just make the characters "Similar" but not the same or would you prefer a fan fiction?

Too bad I can't create a poll.

I saw a girl at the mall today wearing a shirt that read

"If your Erection Lasts Four Hours or more: CALL ME!"

She had a short skirt, and a mask on.

Twitter is full of girls that go out and do shocking things. They seem like they are in a competition to do the most degrading things possible and put pictures on the Internet. They had one called the "Running jump butthole challenge" I think. It was where they run at the camer and jump in such a way you can see their butthole as they come down.

I could never imagined a world like this. I mean I have - I write about it in my stories. However, I sometimes think people think I am too over the top. The real world has colleges with "naked week" where the students (And some faculty) attend class in the nude. The NIS stories we write about aren't even as wild as those campuses.

It's kind of awesome.

I just wanted to let everyone know that I completed the 9th (and final) chapter of "Keeping the womenfolk in line- Bible Story" with the 9th chapter being extra long. I am still finalizing and editing though so expect a chapter probably every day or every other day for a while.

I'll turn voting on around chapter 7 when people have a chance to read enough to make an honest decision about the quality of my writing.

As to the next project?

well, I want to do a Esther Povitsky fan fiction. She is a lesser known comedian - but extremely cute. I've got some ideas about that story line. Her parents think she won't amount to much as a comedian/podcaster and send her to "Whore school" for an education - it's a private campus of about a dozen girls in the same boat as her. It's not an officially sanctioned university or anything.

I've got an idea for a collaboration with my favorite author Mike McGifford. He is working on something BIG- I mean HUGE. A classic tale and when he posts it - you are going to love it. I've been lucky enough to get some previews and offer feedback.

thats all for now.