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You bet your ass

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You bet your ass is up to 12 chapters now.

The entire story is written. We are going through an editing but also adding details. That takes a little time so don't expect a new post everyday. I have been trying to post frequently.

This is one of the best stories that I've been involved in. There is still so much to tell. The story just turned one of its corners in chapter 12

Mike and I are talking about our second story. I think it would be the opposite of this one.

It's also going to involve a lot of bouncing boobies, And probably focus on a Hispanic family. In big day in Sunny Manor, there is a side story about a pony girl and her family. I recently been inspired by a friend of mine on here. I think it might be interesting to focus on One suvh families as main characters.

Sometimes people say that the stories are too over the top to be believable. The thing is, people are so unique and live different lifestyles. What may seem far out to us, is a typical Tuesday night to someone else

A classic example is this link here

https://www.gucmakale.com/wp/mom-and-teen-daughter-share-that-they-still-shower-together/

This mother and daughter shower together. It seems innocent enough but keep in mind that They know it's weird because they gave an interview about it instead of just keeping it to themselves.

Our stories are often about people like that. Once you get beyond the surface of them and kind of examine that there's probably other freaky things that they do, That's when it gets interesting

Some people have said naked in school stories are too over the top.. yet, there are nude weeks at certain colleges where showing up in class naked is acceptable and encouraged by fellow students.

It's hard to believe, And yet it happens.

I think that you bet your ass story feels genuine. As things escalate, it feels organic like it could kind of roll that way. In some families, doing kinky stuff would definitely not fly. People might get divorced. In this one, they are sticking together because they love each other.

I don't know that we ever explicitly say that in the story but it's implied. They don't just discard Carrie for fucking up. I'm not even sure if she fucks up. It's more like an adjustment to how she always wanted to be.

I don't want to give any spoilers away but I'm really happy with this story because the plausiblity is high and the scenario is fun to write. This is ultimately a love story, and a coming-of-age story, just maybe later in life.

Mother's Day weekend

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Mother's Day weekend, how come there's no motherfuckers day weekend?

It should go without saying that there should be a story contest or at least a focus on mother's Day stories.

Every year I ask for folks to post some interesting mother's Day themed stories

One in particular I would love to explore is how a openly BDSM family might handle mother's Day

As an example, say that the husband and wife are in a committed domestic discipline relationship. Their kids and the rest of their family know that the dad is the boss and the mom is submissive. That doesn't necessarily mean that they openly have sex in front of everybody. It just means that They aren't embarrassed of their relationship and they live it openly

How might a mother's Day be a little different in their family.

What if the roles are reversed? A female led marriage, The dad doesn't have control of the money, he does all the chores, etc.

How does he honor mother's Day around the house without being able to buy gifts or take her to dinner.

It's like my mom always said "What the fuck is wrong with you?"

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"What the fuck is wrong with you, Eddie?"

Lol. I am just joking. I am in a rare mood today.

First of all, thanks to all of you deviants who actually took the time to write to me about my last blog post with ideas and suggestions. I am flattered you would take the time to share wicked ideas with me and I am influenced by many of those suggestions.

I was just thinking that it's too bad there is no perverted version of Santa Claus. He can see you when you are naughty. How much does that jolly motherfucker watch? ALL of it?

Anyway, he makes a lists and updates them regularly. It sounds like a pretty well-adjusted human being. He lives in an isolated encampment of his own creation away from humankind - with only the slave labor he uses to construct gifts with an improbable business model where he takes in no revenue but continues to produce consumer goods/retail goods in direct violation of patent laws because he constantly creates dolls and action figures that are already copyrighted by major toy manufacturers?

Yeah, he sounds like a cross between the Unibomber and Jeff Bezos.

Anyway, enough with pointless musings about an imaginary person who isn't real.

Now let me tell you about our latest story (coincidentally about an imaginary character who isn't real)... "You bet your ass"

First of all, yes I know I wrote a story with the same name a few months ago. That was about two sisters who make sex bets. I made it about five chapters before putting it to the side.

This is not THAT story. So if you read that story and thought it was total crap - good news, "You bet your ass" is a totally different story.

"You bet your ass" is about 98% Mike McGifford's work. I've been a muse and done some of the writing but really this is his epic. We decided on this title because it fits so much better. I was glad to give it up.

"You bet your ass" (The current version) is up to chapter six as of this blog. However, unlike my past stories - this one is COMPLETE as of this writing. Yep, we concluded it.

I normaly don't have the patience to write the entire story. I post a chapter as I finish it. This one we did the opposite. We wrote the entire story together and now we are just editing and polishing the chapters - filling in details and ensuring that there are no plot holes.

So you don't have to worry if there will be a satisfying ending. There will be. This is a LONG story - so be prepared for a bumpy ride with a lot of zigs/zags and ups and downs.

The basic premise (no spoilers here) is that Carrie and her eldest daughter do sexy bets around the house. Race around the outside of the house wearing only three strips of duct tape while balancing a dildo on their head, or hold hot blow dryers to their bald pussies to see who can stand it the longest.

However, as you may expect things progress and evolve. My stories are all about a journey and an evolution of the characters. They may start out flawed and end up flawed - but they change.

So by chapter 12 you will see the story arc change - I want you to sit back and relax and enjoy that journey. Take your time with it.

One thing I am also doing is posting little pictures with each chapter. Lajeez (The webmaster) is kind enough to indulge this - but if there is full nudity I have to crop the face or show it as art - and so I am doing my best to comply with that. The pictures are meant to be an accent to the story.

I just post them at the top rather than down in the middle of the story. I did that once and then the tag got left in and the picture was posted somewhere else in the story and people got confused. In interest of simplicity and not making more work for Lajeez I just leave the pictures at the top. Hopefully they don't bother anyone - but if they ever became an issue I would stop. I won't have them in every chapter - and I always crop them to be smaller and not take up much bandwith or screen space.

I do hope that you will read this story - because it is honestly the best one I've been involved with. I do have some side projects I am toying with but most of my effort is spent on the editing process now.

I cant promise a chapter a day every day but it has been moving at that pace for a while now.

Let me know what you think in the comments on the story.

What do you wish me to write next?

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If you follow my stories, and I have a storyline you suggest, offer me some feedback?

Is there an earlier story you want me to continue? If so suggest some ideas about where you'd like to see and go.

Three new ideas in the works;

1. Rob's daughter comes to him and asks for expensive acting lessons. Instead he offers The teach her himself. In the process, he suggest she acts like a slut around the house to convince her mom and the rest of the family that she is a bad girl. Sparks fly when the mom starts punishing the daughter.

2. Woman frequently cheats on her husband. He confronts her with the help of his daughter. She basically dares him to put her in her place at home.

3. A woman who is deeply racist and her daughter are taught a lesson by their neighbor. This would be a story focused heavily on BBC training. I'm not sure if the husband secretly enjoys it or is going to be more overt about insisting it happen.

I can't tell you too many more details without giving away the twists. Do any of those spark your fancy? New and different ideas?

Saint Patricks Filth

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I see a lot of Christmas/Thanksgiving/Halloween stories, but almost never hear of someone getting fucked on Saint Patty's day.

just an observation and a suggestion to write more filth and Erin Go Bragh (Less).

WITH RED HEADS!!

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