Eddie Davidson: Blog

I've been posting "Keeping the Babysitter In Line" almost daily for a while and I am up to chapter 38. I have 50 chapters total with at least a dozen more to finish before the story concludes.

This story also has some of the highest readership statistics of my past stories (Short of "Do you have a big dick? Why not?" and Big Deal at Sunny Manor).

https://storiesonline.net/s/26845/keeping-the-babysitter-in-line

It has been one of the most enjoyable stories to write. I get to relive the 1980s through my character's eyes and share it with you.

Next week I may not get to post much but do not be alarmed. I have no plans to leave you in the lurch on this story. It's could actually end right where it is and it would be a satisfying ending. I have 50 chapters of compressed time sharing moment to moment how the main character spent a kinky weekend with his babysitter and her family.

I am writing what I consider to be "Bonus" (Boner) chapters of the aftermath of that weekend and what follows for lucky Brian as he processes that weekend and his new relationships. I've been developing and evolving him as well and I want him to flex that progression from being a wet-behind-the-ears annoying know-it-all into a far less wet behind the ears, slightly less annoying kid that realizes he doesn't know-it-all.

His confidence has grown as he matured over the weekend. Let's test that and see if now that he isn't under Dennis's roof how it carries over into real life.

I named this Blog Post "TitTok" because there is basically unending porn (mostly clothed) on TikTok out there that you could be watching. A little quick cheesecake and a smile instead of taking the time to enjoy a detailed story that ebbs and flows like some perverted epic about a teenage boy's coming of age.

I don't get a lot of feedback. The most recent comment said that there wasn't enough action. Keep in mind, he's literally hung them from the rafters, put them on spanish horses, fucked them in every hole, bound them, spanked them, humiliated them in public, taken them on a journey to the beach and played dare games, taken them to Rocky Horror Picture show, etc.

A LOT has happened. I feel that the best stories cannot be balls-out 600 mph where there is constant adrenalin. In order to be excited by those 600 mph scenes, you need the story to arc and take things down to a realistic notch and catch your breath before being plunged into another crazy shenanigan.

I've tried very hard to present the characters as real people with jobs, lives, and real needs who happen to put aside one weekend out of the month to enjoy some kinky stuff. In order to do that - yes, there are introspective times when it's not constant stroke material but to me - those are some of the sexiest times because they feel visceral and authentic.

I am considering my next project after this one. I don't want to commit to anything quite yet. I've got a few old stories that I could continue. Closing out Resetting my Bitch Button was a big win for me. It was long overdue and a labor of love.

I've been considering dabbling in a fantasy epic about a female Orc Warrior that has taken a religious vow to fight naked (without armor) until she earns a valiant death.

I've also considered doing one in the "KIS" universe created by Badger Hole. This is basically naked in school, except it is "Kink in school" where instead of just body-positive, they are teaching not to kink-shame and kink-positive as part of the criteria. It postulates a future where things like TitTok are quaint, and people are societies morals are a bit more jaded - so that nudity in advertising is far more main stream. Sex work is mainstream, etc

I don't think the real world is all that far from it.

I'm also thinking about one literally called "TitTok" where a girl finds herself on TikTok going viral and at first her parents are opposed to it - but she is making so much money that they tell her to go for it. The problem of course is it's mostly men watching her bounce her big old titties under the auspices she is "Dancing".

I've got a few other story ideas I may consider next. I may just do a couple short stories as a pallette cleanse. It's hard for me because once I start building a character, I fall in love with them and don't want to let them go.

Is there something you want to see me write about?

What If nipples clicked in and out like pens?

You could play with them at meetings and such. It would make Zoom calls more interesting.

Anyway, short blog today. Just a quick note to say that the issue with the pictures in Keeping the Babysitter in Line were resolved. I created "sections" to break up the story. The "judgment" party, the beach, and now the Rocky Horror Picture show is in full swing.

It was such a pleasure to write these last few chapters about RHPS. I drew on my own observations from way back when and incorporated them heavily to offer an authentic experience.

I just posted up the chapter with the "Time Warp" in it. I could not resist adding vintage captioned illustrations. I've started making some look like polaroid snapshots to give it a more 70s/80s feel.

I don't get a ton of feedback about the story. Most of it has been really positive. Its really imho the best story I've written so far. I know I probably say that about every story I am working on at the time - but this one feels really good.

I was going to wrap at the end of the weekend but I feel there is more to tell as Brian goes to high school with Rachel and so I'll probably continue on.

I am starting to think about what to do next - may wrap up some other stories I've had sitting near completion. I was excited to hear from those who read Resetting my Bitch Button. It was a lot of effort to finish. I haven't heard much but most people seemed really to have two thoughts:

1. They loved Maria and the pony girl stuff towards the end of the story and how she dreamed of being one. I may do more with that type of scenario in the future.

2. They wanted to see more with Emily and her story. I don't want to spoil the ending - but they wanted to continue on with her story and how things would evolve.

I think the character's story has been told - but I am curious what you think? would anyone consider writing a fan-fiction take on what they think happens next?

I don't know what went wrong because they were previously aligned correctly but the illustrations with captions are all wonky in Keeping the Babysitter in Line.

They do not align with the context of the chapter they are assigned to any longer. I am not sure why that happened. If you right click and hit save you will see the file name corresponding to the appropriate chapter.

I've alerted Lajeez and I am sure this is a temporary problem but in case you are asking "What the fuck?" just understand that so am I.

I've recently started using a polaroid filter to give it more of a 70s/80s feel so if I need to resubmit I'll probably do that to most of them.

Years ago I met someone who told me that she liked discipline because it reset her bitch button. An intense session for a weekend made her less snotty and overall less unpleasant for a time.

However, she would eventually revert to her normal crabby behavior. She used the sessions like a chance to atone or purge for shitty things she did over the month and get her attitude adjustment.

That was the genesis of "Resetting My Bitch Button" asking - what if she finally had enough of looking at the bitch in the mirror staring back at her and concluded she should have that button held down permanently.

For the last two years I've been on-again/off-again writing this epic 52 chapter story. It's slightly over 300,000 words and it tells the tale of a woman who meets someone online willing to give her that experience.

In most stories, such characters have no family or obligations that prevent them from going down this rabbit hall. The "Shades of Gray" world where the woman is impossibly single with no family, and the man is a millionaire with no family connections either.

They have no financial obligations like a job to worry about. They have no bills to pay. No shopping to do. No house to clean because they have servants in the background scurrying about handling things. They don't even have a pet to feed or walk or a doctor's appointment to deal with.

I didn't focus on the mundane but I tried to present characters who had real life and all the dysfunction and chaos that can come with that. Unexpected people join the trek to Florida in an RV as they make their way to the master's house where we he lives with his family.

This is the story of that journey and the evolution along the journey. I didn't focus on what happens when they get there.

I took a long hiatus from writing the story for a variety of reasons -which stunted the readership. It was a labor of love because it was also an homage to some of my favorite authors (no spoilers in this post).

Now, it is complete and I invite you to give it a read through from the very start and see if this is one of my better stories or not.

https://storiesonline.net/s/22921/resetting-my-bitch-button

How many people have fond memories of going to a theater and seeing the Rocky Horror Picture Show?

I do.

I often write stories about people who intertwine kink into their daily lives 24/7 as much as possible. They still have to do things like eat and pay bills.

I made a decision with "Keeping the Babysitter in Line" to write about a family that does most of that on one weekend a month. It just so happens the main character is visiting on that particular weekend.

They let down their hair and indulge in their masochistic fantasies. The girls are adrenaline junkies and like raw sex.

I am working on posting chapters 15-17 which I believe are probably the most exciting in the entire story. I had to lay the framework to get to this point so that the context would be there. If not, I think it would have seemed way over the top. Don't worry - the girls are safe and their father has a lot of experience with the show he is putting on.

I also wanted to show them doing other things - vanilla things. In the story, around chapter 32 they are going to Rocky Horror Picture Show. The main character's introduction will include many of my own observations as an amalgam into the experience. I am hoping that comes across as authentic and may give you a sense of nostalgia if you've ever been.

This is a departure and a little risky for me - because it's not a sex romp. Some risque' things happen because - it's Rocky Horror. However, it isn't anything that would really shock anyone who has ever been to one of their shows. It's campy and fun.

I wanted to see if that is a welcome storyline twist to people who follow my writing?

I definitely have a hard-core (small) group of dedicated perverts that seem to enjoy my writing. That's part of what drives me to stretch myself as an author. I wanted to make these characters feel as real as possible. I also wanted to incorporate Rocky Horror into an erotic story - not sure if anyone has done that except in fanfiction. A kind of homage.

I've also made a conscious attempt to use vintage photographs whenever possible to include as captions of the story. I wanted to capture the big hair and make-up of the 1980s.

Keeping the Babysitter in Line - is imho one of the best stories I've ever written. I don't get a lot of feedback about it.

I'll be curious (especially when I post the Rocky chapters) if you enjoy it. I would love to hear from you.