Eddie Davidson: Blog

I've published 45 stories on here (most of which are concluded).

My text comprises 15213kb. I don't know what the word count is for that. The word count for the largest stories exceeds 260,000 which is comparable in size to Ulysses by James Joyce. War and Peace is about twice that number though - but considering I've written five stories in that range, you can say that I am verbose at the very least.

There are two stories that I wrote quite some time ago that I still get feedback on. HOA: Big Day in Sunny Manor is the biggest one. I must have caught lightning in the bottle with that one.

I didn't have a real plan for that story. I wanted to tell a story about a (mostly) Vanilla family moving to a kink-friendly nudist resort in Tampa and learning that their parents are Dom/sub.

I told the story from the eldest son's POV, sort of fish out of water. I took my time and really gave life to subplots and lesser characters.

I tried writing a sequel of sorts. I've still got some unpublished chapters but it didnt' quite land like the first one - at least not with me.

The other story I get positive/constructive comments on the most is "Do you have a big dick, why not?"

This is the story of an average nerdy guy (I guess that's a pattern in my stories). He likes this girl with big doe-eyes, big tits, big butt, that is shy at his school.

She doesn't normally let boys get close to her. She doesn't try to stand out from the crowd or be the hot girl. She is just kind of average to most.

However, he sees something in her. Her mother, older sister and her webcam at night for money. It's a pervasive part of their lives and she assumes that most boys would not be able to deal with that.

The Mom from the story is based on a real stripper I knew that has turned to webcamming because its safer/more money. She can live off her only fans library. The eponymous title comes from something she asks the main character when she first meets him.

"Do you have a big dick?" (or cocaine or money? then why are you talking to me?)

The story has some interesting twists, and I won't spoil them for you if you have never read it.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

There is a sequel that takes things in a new direction."It's not cheating if you watch".

I didn't even MS Word back then to help me spell check and no editor at all. There may be some pretty big spelling errors. I hadn't figured out how to caption stories with pictures yet either.

So I've some questions for you: I am wrapping up my existing stories and thinking about my next project?

Would you rather I write an entirely NEW story or would you like to see me to do a "Reboot". I'd take the same characters/set-up but tell a slightly different story.

Part of that is a question about whether or not those characters and that scenario was memorable enough to do a reboot treatment. Captain Kirk and Mr. Spock were so beloved that rebooting them is a no-brainer (even if some old fans won't appreciate the update of a classic).

People retell Scrooge every year - does "Do you have a big dick, why not?" need another coat of paint?

or did I tell the story I needed to tell and I should tell new ones?

Everything is a time sink. If I am doing one thing I can't be doing the other thing. I have to pick one. I could also clean up the old story and add captions. It's had close to 50,000 downloads though, so I'd imagine anyone on here who isn't my kind of kink has read it already and may not care to see the cleaned up "blu-ray" edition just because I added a few 4k scenes to the old version of it.

I have been struggling with the help of a few freinds/long time readers to act as an editor.

I do not correspond outside of SOL With my personal email, which makes it difficult because I rely upon the internal email system.

However, you will see few updates from me, and the ones that do happen will unfortunately have reduced quality.

Editors are more than grammar check on steroids. They are the ones who help keep the story consistent and guide me when I start down a strange path.

I have *FOUR* stories in process. Here are the statuses:

Puppy Student Program - NIS - I wanted to do an alternative discipline naked in school story about puppy-play. I was inspired by something someone wrote about "Best of intentions" from school administrators in the forums.

Essentially, the idea behind it (without telling the students) would not only be body/kink positivity but also the experience would make students more inclined to follow instructions/be man's best friend if they could adopt the attitude of a dog for just a week.

STATUS:
I posted chapter six, with some bad edits/errors that I've tried to fix with a recent update that should be posted shortly.

I have 14 chapters with the story almost concluded. After Katie and Ashley's first week, I went down a very different path with them. I am thinking of just cutting that out entirely.

Resetting my Bitch Button:
I came back strong with this one, and have 10 chapters in edit. Jessie's arc as he leaves the nudist resort much more confident, and then subsequently his cousin's experimentation with submission have added a whole "third act" to the story. I was planning to take them to disney world and then to live with Mike for a while.

Unfortunately, no editor - so chapters are slow to post. There are at least 5 more chapters to this story before I think it concludes although a sequel focused strictly on Buttercup might be fun.

Christmas Cums Butt Once Per Year:
This story is complete and has 15 chapters. The exception is the most recent chapter. I am still futzing with it, because I am not sure it is plausible or fits and while I like it - I also think it could be better.

No editor means I can't get this one posted that much but the VERY satisfying conclusion awaits.

Keeping the Entire Family in Line:
This and the prequel (keeping the men in the family in line) has been put on hold. I really enjoyed the family essentially building their own contract of how things would be - but I lost inspiration somewhere along the way and this will be on hiatus for a bit.

I'd love for a guest author to also write a little fan fiction about some of these characters or collaborate on some with me. It could be interesting to see the story from other character's perspectives or embellish a little on some of what happens during and after.

What is new for 2022:

A long time friend and collaborator of mine has recently said he may not be participating on the site much any more which is a real bummer. He had all these awesome vignettes that he wrote that I'd like to do justice with.

Visiting Aunt Scarlet is a published an example of one of his stories that went about five chapter strong and then he lost interest and so I stopped making updates to it. I'd like to finish that one.

We had another one about a woman who answers a personal ad for BDSM relationship only to find out it is her dad (and mom). What do they do now?

We had another one about called "Big Montana Tits" (a play on Big Montana Sky) about a boy who travels to a Montana ranch with his family. The ranch owner's idea of discipline is not quite as extreme as most of my stories - girls get to wear clothes (most of the time) for instance. I wanted to explore a kinky but not extreme lifestyle.

Lastly, I've had this idea about retelling a George's Pichard classic story "Marie Gabrielle". It's a graphic novel you can probably find if you google it. I think I would focus on the first part.

In it, this woman is a widow and she lives with her husband's affluent mother. At some point, she is bored and stays home from church to suck her brother in law's cock in the water closet. She is caught, disgraced and in her fall from grace accepts that she has a choice: Either life as a servant at the house, or public humiliation and marched through the streets to a house for disgraced women.

She chooses to remain there, with her son and daughter, and this would be the story from one of their perspectives I think.

I haven't been making the progress I'd like with "Keeping the Entire Family in Line" and I have a few other stories in progress that need finishing as well.

It's been a tough year, and it still feels like 2020 - just in overtime.

I was wondering if 2020-2021 were a sex story on SOL how that might go?

Everyone in masks, afraid to stand within 6 feet of each other, touchless and alone.

The toilet paper shortage hits. It's so bad we have to drag our butts across the lawn (up hill both ways).

Murder hornets appear for some reason, and then like an author with a memory lapse they fail to materialize in later chapters.

When all the Haitians appeared on our southern border, if I were writing the story the President would have dispatched an army of blonde, BBC loving milfs to fuck their brains out. It wouldn't have done much about immigration but it would have been more fun to watch.

The problem is life isn't always like my stories - and its been a real hard one these past two years with no end in sight. I ask that you bear with me while I deal with my creative shortage.

I've got more stories to tell.

I know it's been slow going with the release of chapters on "Keeping the Entire Family In Line"

This has been one of my favorite stories and I really enjoy their adventures. However, I believe the story may be coming to a natural conclusion. I've said that before and then ended up writing 20 more chapters in a flurry - so here is hoping.

I am wondering if the captioned illustration adds anything to the story? I spend a lot of time thinking about the perfect illustration to add. They say one picture is a 1000 words, so I try to add something that helps set the tone for the entire chapter.

If I do not have anything that particular chapter I don't post anything at all.

I think chapter 39 moves things along very nicely with the story - we see a return of some old characters and another transformational moment for the family. It seems that they have these intense turning points where things change because of a single decision.

I've been thinking about what I will do when the story is over. There are two stories I want to finish - Dolphin Shores (DS) is a "Homeowner's Association" story set in a kink-friendly community in Tampa. I left that family in the middle of it to finish this story. They deserve a proper story!

Here is an interesting bit of trivia: the main character from "Keeping the Entire Family In Line" was originally going to be a featurette in a four-part story called "Best Mother Ever" about four different women who are competing for the ironic title by telling their stories of depravity and perversions.

I was going to write it with Mike McGifford. He would take two moms and I would take two and we would make them compete for the title.

However, Kim struck me as being so perfectly imperfect that I could not contain her in a short story.

I originally wrote the first short story from her husband's point of view and I was going to shift to her telling the rest of the story. That was the genesis for her husband's "Keeping the Menfolk In Line" story.

I basically skipped ahead seven months to what I considered the "Good part" and told "Keeping the Entire Family" from that point.

I often write stories with the intent that MAYBE I will inspire someone else to write these kind of stories. Very few people on this site write that kind of dirty story. I often add side characters like Carl (the neighbor) or Charlotte who seem to have stories of their own to tell with the thought maybe someone will.

Charlotte (Athena's friend) is sort of the "Control" character - a "normal" modern teenage girl. She isn't a prude, she likes being naked, but she isn't nearly as gung-ho as Athena and Myra. I think in the next few chapters you'll see things evolve with her in a way that feels pretty natural. Honestly, I could see writing a follow up story about her life.

She took the job working at their house for shits and giggles. Her parents are seldom home and seem to be going through a potential divorce scenario. She is kind of a blank canvas. If anyone would prefer to write fanfiction on this story - you have my blessing.

Lastly, I'll end my little ramble with two other story ideas.

I'm very enamored with good historical fiction that includes kink. I love French author Pichard and I was thinking about retelling one of his stories (Embelishing quite heavily) and including some of his art work. Thoughts?

I think I'd start with an Antebellum American Slave Plantation in the deep south. The husband's eldest daughter is something of a jezebel and a free-thinker. He is a medical doctor and carefully controls when his slaves can breed so that they are not full term during harvest months. He feels he gets more out of them that way.

He employs some of his techniques to bind and lock his eldest daughters clit/nipples "The devil's playthings" that he uses on his slaves when he doesn't want them breeding and needs them for harvest. The story could begin with him showing her off to a colleague and his wife blushing at the impropietary of allowing a white girl to be paraded around naked in the same manner as a common slave.

Then see where it goes from there as the civil war starts to unfold and the slaves gain their freedom.

Would that interest anyone?

I've also had an idea for a short story where a young man discovers that his little sister will do whatever he tells her. She used to do everything he told her when they were little and one day he tells her to stop hogging the shower.

She normally complains/bitches, but this time he hears silence except for the sound of the water abruptly being turned off "are you asking me or telling me?"

"What is the difference?"

She sighs and turns the water back on, to enjoy a nice warm shower on her huge boobs.

"Fine, I am telling YOU." he says.

She turns off the water and starts to dry off.

"Open the door"

"I am not dressed yet, Brian."

"I am not asking. I am TELLING you"

She sighs but opens the door and stands there dripping wet in the nude. He discovers she still feels he has near absolute/parental authority just like he did when they were little and he babysat her. However, what makes this interesting as a story is that she is not some bubble headed bimbo that gets off on being an extrovert. She seems perturbed - but stubbornly insists on obeying him if he TELLS her to do something.

"Play with yourself"

"Brian, if Mom walks in, we are both going to be in trouble. At least let me shut the bathroom door"

"No, door stays open, play with yourself"

"Fine, but play with myself how? just my pussy?"

"How else would you?" he asks naively.

"Well, if I were going to play with myself I'd lie down in the bathtub and finger my asshole too, and stroke my nipples."

"Fine, you can do that"

"I can, or I have to?"

"You have to."

I enjoy reading Indian Erotica.

Usually, it seems to be about powerful matronly women, submissive sisters, and is told by a very horny (often naive) young man.

At least - this is the kind I like to read.

I tried to write an homage to those stories in the form of "Nehal". It wasn't a very popular story. It is only three chapters. I researched regional dialects, food, etc. However, I could never be certain I got it right.

I asked (at the time) for someone from India to give it a read and let me know what they thought. I never received any feedback one way or the other.

I decided to spruce up the story this weekend. I added a little more content, checked the grammar, and added one story picture.

If you are a fan of India Erotica/My stories and you want something short and sweet - here it is;

https://storiesonline.net/s/23207/nehal