Eddie Davidson: Blog

They are real Tear Jerkers.

Sometimes I wonder if it would be fun to write a story about someone who doesn't read codes to the stories on Sol and then comments "this story sucks. It has cross-dressing in it. Im downvoting" when that was in the codes of the story

The first chapter of my new story would begin with him falling down a manhole because he saw the sign that said
"Warning manhole" but rather than
Go around as the code suggested, he stepped in it and of course died.

It would be a short story with a very happy ending.

It's been 260,000 words and about a year since I put it aside.

I realized as I was crafting what may be my longest and most epic story that I was truly telling the story of several main characters and not doing that well.

Kim (the original main character) had been the center of the family and she remained the storyteller.

However, her daughters each had their personal journey of discovery. Her husband was experiencing friction from his 'real life' and his fetish life overlapping and the structure that comforted him was eroding and evaporating before his eyes.

Her son most of all was going to go down a rabbit hole of self-discovery and coming of age that involved truly growing up in the course of the story.

It was either write several branching storylines that themselves were epic or simply not do justice to any of them. I chose instead to put the story away and let it percolate.

I completed the prequel "Keeping the Menfolk in Line" which takes place 8 months before the events in Keeping the Entire Family in Line yesterday. It sets the tone for her husband's interest in dominance and submission.

Last night, I sat down to write what I hope is a satisfying epilogue style chapter to the conclusion of Keeping the Entire Family in Line. I could never truly do justice to it if I continued it in the 'day to day' style of telling the story as well because I had developed so many interesting side-characters and after putting it aside for a year - that was challenging.

In many ways, I just felt I needed to bring conclusion to this family that I breathed life into. I had seen things change through their eyes and felt I owed them as much. This chapter won't continue their journey as much as leave it in a place that is well concluded. It is my hope that as you imagine those side-stories and their continuing exploration of kink that you one day write stories like this - as I'd love to read them.

I'll continue concluding Keeping the Babysitter in line (only a few chapters left!) and roll out the Tig Ol Bitties story.

I do have one other to preview. It's a departure for me because I've tried to make it about the 'mundane' ness of a fairly normal family and a fairly mundane girl going on vacation. Since I wrote a story about girls with big boobs (Tig Ol Bitties), I thought it only fair I call this one "Itty Bitty Titty Committee" to give you some idea of who is in it.

A Blonde Radios the Air Traffic Controller (A short story)

Blonde: Breaker, Breaker-One Nine. I am in the air in a small plane and the pilot is dead. I don't know how to fly. Over.

ATC: "This is air traffic control and I hear you loud and clear. Just try to relax. I'll talk you through this and get you back on the ground. Everything will be fine. What is your position?"

Blonde: "Doggy style and then cowgirl, but I got off of him when he died. Do I need to get back on top?"

When I first started writing on this site is was a dismal failure. I've even removed some of my early stories because they are so bad (imho).

I've always been blessed (or cursed) with creativity and being a pervert. Those two attributes have driven my need to write even though I had very little technical ability.

I did not even have MS Word or Grammarly.

I once got to exchange emails with one of my inspirations - Vulgus. He told me he had a "Sixth grade writing ability".

Well, I graduated 6th grade, and he writes way the fuck better than I ever will. It was his stories that largely inspired me to start writing some of my own.

It was for selfish reasons though. There wasn't enough stories like his on this site. I thought if I could write some stories then maybe I would inspire others as he inspired me - and voila: more stories.

I also see it as therapeutic to see the world through the eyes of my characters. I can live viscerally in their head and get out of my own for a short time. It doesn't matter if I am writing or reading a story - it is an escape.

I've had a lot of help over the years. Mike McGifford a fellow author has been a true inspiration. I've had a few people volunteer to be 'editors' but the real world got in the way and they lost interest, or worse: They signed up without realizing that I do not have many boundaries as a writer and one particular kink or story twist was unsavory to them.

A few months ago when I began Keeping the Babysitter in line, I had one person (who shall be nameless as they prefer it that way) offer to edit for me. He didn't rewrite my entire story or anything like that.

What he did was READ the version I would likely publish before I did. Then he would send back something like this with corrections. The line from my story and then the correction:

Rachel slapped his ass.
Rachel slapped her ass.

I've done a lot to fix grammatical and spelling, but there are these little inconsistencies and mistakes that creep into my work. That's sloppy on my part and I can notice them immediately in someone else's story. I've read mine SO much trying to squash errors that I am often blinded to my own mistakes because my mind fills in the blank of what is supposed to be written there.

So here is all I am asking for:

Qualifications:
1. A reader who enjoys my stories. If you are a fan of them, you know what I write about.

2. Basic common sense.

3. Patience.

Job Description:

I will email you a copy of the story in advance BEFORE I post it. Alternatively, you can read it after I post it. It's easier to read. I do not do external email for a variety of reasons.

Then, at your own pace - simply read the story and send me a small list of things you noticed that were out of place.

Example:
"I helped my actual Jack off a horse"
"I helped my Uncle Jack off a horse."

Pay Range: Eternal gratitude of one lonely, pervert.

That's it.