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If you were going to start an Itty Bitty Titty Club

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I've been thinking about the Itty Bitty Titty Club stories I posted.

It wasn't a "Club". It was something the older sister said to tease her little sisters for now yet budding into women. It was ultimately used to humiliate them.

I was thinking, If I did a third story about different girls, and actually made it a club, what would the rules and purpose of the club be? It may confuse readers if it is a standalone story though.

Drop me a note if you have some ideas.

I haven't received any feedback about Daredevil mom yet. I am only on chapter four but I particularly adore this story. The main character of Tracy is not my typical main character and I think she was a lot of fun to develop. She is absolute honesty and she has no hang ups about sex - she enjoys it. She likes to give to others and in that sense she is submissive but she is not the kind of submissive I often write.

She gets off on doing dares and makes no pretense that she doesn't. I think you'll love the twists and turns if you give this story a chance. I have 13 chapters plus 3 bonus chapters - I could have posted as a stand alone but I think they should probably fold into this one. I am not sure yet.

Any constructive feedback on the story so far?

Votes put it in the middle tier but I think there are a lot of high votes and a lot of low votes from trolls that genuinely hate everything I post and simply try to 'punish' me by downvoting the story. There were two downvotes within a minute of the first chapter posting.

I have another story that is over 30 chapters that I am chomping at the bit to post up. It's about a guy in a wheelchair and his mom has an only fans site but it's about a lot more. It's not "over the top" and IMHO, it is another of my favorite stories because there is a lot of the MC in me as well. I've been tempted to start posting the story once a week until I finish out daredevil mom.

I am just not sure because it seems like if I wait between chapters the story languishes and people lose interest. I hate that.

it's almost like they only want to read the latest content and never go back and read my older content and if there is a gap/delay between posts they lost interest.

I just want to hurry up and share this one with you because I really do think many people will find something to enjoy about the story. It really is much more than a "day in the life" of someone who produces only fans content. it's about a power exchange relationship that develops and evolves naturally.

Should I dare try to post two stories at once again?

Daredevil Mom

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Two chapters left to "Itty Bitty Titty Committee" - hopefully you enjoyed the ride.

I apologize for the short break. I had an unexpected computer melt-down.

The next story is "Daredevil Mom"- I think today I'll post a preview chapter. It's a story about a woman who loves doing dares and sees nothing wrong if they are a bit naughty. She has fun with it, and the sillier they are the better. She considers it a bit like granting wishes.

She also has an open marriage as a hot wife and her husband is fine with it - or is he?

There are four bonus chapters at the end of this story! I think it is one of my best!

The Babysitter

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I challenged myself to write a two chapter short story.

I don't generally enjoy those because just when I fall in love with the characters the story is over - sort of like unfulfilling sex. Just when it gets going somebody squirts and it ends.

I fudged a little though.

I used existing characters from an epic story called "You bet your ass". I would say this event happens somewhere after a few chapters in the main story as something left out by the main character before the "Big bet" toward the end.

This is a two chapter story - I made a deal with myself that I wouldn't turn it into an epic. That is how "Keeping the entire family in line" happened. I was working on a vignette to insert into a collection of stories with a friend about a submissive couple that wanted to meet a new dom for the first time and voila - 50+ chapters later I was finished.

I have been saving pictures in a folder that seem to tell a story all by themselves. I picked five pictures and decided to pick TWO of them and write the story around those photos. It was incredibly helpful as a creative excercise.

If this story wets your appetite for "You Bet Your Ass" I highly recommend it - it will provide some context for why the family is so unusual and used to the mom and sister making bets when Mark the babysitter arrives.

Mark has been babysitting his brothers for years and just recently started babysitting on the side for money - so he is in for a treat.

I may go back to some of my other stories that people seem to enjoy like HOA and Do you have a big dick why not and see if I can write a short story like this to add to it.

Are new stories coming too fast?

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Simple question. Do you want me to slow down posting?

Tig Ol Bitties: Conclusion tomorrow

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28 chapters, a lot of work.

I am hoping it was a fun read, especially for fans of mind control stories. I hope the ending will be satisfying and that I possibly see other stories of this same type in the future.

I'd certainly encourage anyone to fan fiction the hell out of these characters with their own story set a after this one concludes (or even during if that's your jam). You have my total permission to do that with literally any of my stories.

I've tried to keep the pace up to post a chapter every day - is that good or bad for most people?

Is it sort of a "Too fast!" or a binge read?

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