Eddie Davidson: Blog

I challenged myself to write a two chapter short story.

I don't generally enjoy those because just when I fall in love with the characters the story is over - sort of like unfulfilling sex. Just when it gets going somebody squirts and it ends.

I fudged a little though.

I used existing characters from an epic story called "You bet your ass". I would say this event happens somewhere after a few chapters in the main story as something left out by the main character before the "Big bet" toward the end.

This is a two chapter story - I made a deal with myself that I wouldn't turn it into an epic. That is how "Keeping the entire family in line" happened. I was working on a vignette to insert into a collection of stories with a friend about a submissive couple that wanted to meet a new dom for the first time and voila - 50+ chapters later I was finished.

I have been saving pictures in a folder that seem to tell a story all by themselves. I picked five pictures and decided to pick TWO of them and write the story around those photos. It was incredibly helpful as a creative excercise.

If this story wets your appetite for "You Bet Your Ass" I highly recommend it - it will provide some context for why the family is so unusual and used to the mom and sister making bets when Mark the babysitter arrives.

Mark has been babysitting his brothers for years and just recently started babysitting on the side for money - so he is in for a treat.

I may go back to some of my other stories that people seem to enjoy like HOA and Do you have a big dick why not and see if I can write a short story like this to add to it.

Simple question. Do you want me to slow down posting?

28 chapters, a lot of work.

I am hoping it was a fun read, especially for fans of mind control stories. I hope the ending will be satisfying and that I possibly see other stories of this same type in the future.

I'd certainly encourage anyone to fan fiction the hell out of these characters with their own story set a after this one concludes (or even during if that's your jam). You have my total permission to do that with literally any of my stories.

I've tried to keep the pace up to post a chapter every day - is that good or bad for most people?

Is it sort of a "Too fast!" or a binge read?

I recently found a website that had pretty much every erotic graphic novel that has ever been made, and there are certainly other story sites on the Internet.

However, I just can't seem to say enough good things about this one.

Sure, there are some areas of improvement but the interface and way this site works - it "just works"

It's got a great searching and author tools, and it makes it easy to write.

I have posted on other sites but it was years ago but this is not only my home base, it's pretty much my exclusive one.

I recently discovered a tool to help me proof read my own stories, and I went into Tig's Mind Control and started fixing some back-chapters. It was mostly comma missing here or there, but a few times where I had an extra word or a missing one and MS Word just didn't let me know.

SOL made is SUPER easy to repost those chapters and make the corrections, and that's something other sites often aren't set up to do (unless you are editing what is essentially a forum post yourself).

I am hopeful that going forward my new chapters will be a lot cleaner and easier to read.

I just wanted to say thanks to the Webmaster and his Webminions and to all the people who contribute in one form or another on SOL. You inspire me to keep writing, thank you.

I have several stories concluded to post, and I am just editing them. I have a follow up to Itty Bitty Titty. I have 9 more chapters of Tig's Mind Control Adventure. I have a great story called "Mother May I" that is fairly short about a woman who is forced to play a game with her kids on a rainy day.

I have one called "Dare Devil" mom that I am quite proud of about a woman that is kinky/open minded and likes to do dares for her kids - but it's a bit different than the UK one. That's a bit longer as well.

I am currently working on finishing a story about a 20 year old disabled man who discovers his mom has started an Only Fans. I was inspired by the fact that Denice Richards (she is a C-list actress that was married to Charlie Sheen) started one with her daughter, and a friend of mine who mentioned he was disabled. This is going to be a really epic story and fairly long about how their relationship changes as a result.

I thought I would ask the people who read my blog to send me their idea of a synopsis of a story (knowing what stories I write) of what you'd like to see.

I've considered doing something like a historical fantasy recently, but I am not convinced I can pull off "Action Adventure". I am still futzing with that idea.

The three ideas I have on my hot list are as follows (but I'll consider anything)

1 - Story set in the 1960s, involving domestic discipline. I was thinking about a situation where the parents are fairly strict right off the bat, two sons, two daughters, lots of red butts, and not a lot of BDSM.

They'd be strict but loving, so it's not going to be abusive, but there would be alot of bare asses and such.

I've never done a story set in that time period. I Was wondering if it might be fun to use sort of a "Mad Men" idealized 1960s setting with scotch, and business suits.

2- A female led relationship story. There are not a lot of good ones of these out there. Games by ByDaSea is the only one I know of on SOL. Femdom/FLR stories often focus on 'cuckold' where the woman is a nympho who wants an excuse to fuck anyone but her husband. My experience is that most FLR the women simply want their husband to worship them as their queen and are the dominants in the relationship.

If you were to write a male character the way most female dominants in femdom stories, people would consider the male a narcissistic sociopath. I want a loving FLR - but with lots of bdsm/humiliation.

I would probably set the story with a retired man, who is with his wife in an RV. His two adult sons, and a daughter are there as well. He is former military, used to getting this his own way, blusters and yells when he gets mad.

The wife and her friend confront him with new rules, but there is no blackmail or coercion. They simply want him to accept that the wife is in charge. He is reluctant and skeptical but agrees and this would be a story about their adventures on the road.

Third story: The story begins in the DMV with a woman talking to her co-worker.

"The only person that can order me around is my kid, haha" she jokes.

"What?" he is shocked.

"My eight year old. It's just easier to do what she wants. Yesterday she got a notion to unravel all the toilet paper. I just said, 'whatever'"

Fast forward 8 years later. The daughter is a blue-eyed, blonde hair, snot-nosed brat (which may irritate some readers) who runs her mom, older brother, and older sister. If she doesn't get her way her tantrums are legendary. She sleeps in the master bedroom because she has 'allergies' and can't be in the smaller room, she drives moms car, mom has the second hand car, won't be caught dead in cheap clothes.

Mom has lost every relationship she ever could have had, bedraggled, brother and sister are worn down too.

Story begins. "Get that off, you look hideous, mom!"

"Okay Angelica, I just thought it.."

"You thought what? that you'd embarrass me today? Take it off right now..."

"I'll go to my room and change. Did you have.."

"No, here in the kitchen!"

"What?"

"Are you hard of hearing. Do it"

This is where it begins. I could make it kind of obvious that the woman gets off on it, whether she admits it or not.