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28 chapters, a lot of work.
I am hoping it was a fun read, especially for fans of mind control stories. I hope the ending will be satisfying and that I possibly see other stories of this same type in the future.
I'd certainly encourage anyone to fan fiction the hell out of these characters with their own story set a after this one concludes (or even during if that's your jam). You have my total permission to do that with literally any of my stories.
I've tried to keep the pace up to post a chapter every day - is that good or bad for most people?
Is it sort of a "Too fast!" or a binge read?
I recently found a website that had pretty much every erotic graphic novel that has ever been made, and there are certainly other story sites on the Internet.
However, I just can't seem to say enough good things about this one.
Sure, there are some areas of improvement but the interface and way this site works - it "just works"
It's got a great searching and author tools, and it makes it easy to write.
I have posted on other sites but it was years ago but this is not only my home base, it's pretty much my exclusive one.
I recently discovered a tool to help me proof read my own stories, and I went into Tig's Mind Control and started fixing some back-chapters. It was mostly comma missing here or there, but a few times where I had an extra word or a missing one and MS Word just didn't let me know.
SOL made is SUPER easy to repost those chapters and make the corrections, and that's something other sites often aren't set up to do (unless you are editing what is essentially a forum post yourself).
I am hopeful that going forward my new chapters will be a lot cleaner and easier to read.
I just wanted to say thanks to the Webmaster and his Webminions and to all the people who contribute in one form or another on SOL. You inspire me to keep writing, thank you.
I have several stories concluded to post, and I am just editing them. I have a follow up to Itty Bitty Titty. I have 9 more chapters of Tig's Mind Control Adventure. I have a great story called "Mother May I" that is fairly short about a woman who is forced to play a game with her kids on a rainy day.
I have one called "Dare Devil" mom that I am quite proud of about a woman that is kinky/open minded and likes to do dares for her kids - but it's a bit different than the UK one. That's a bit longer as well.
I am currently working on finishing a story about a 20 year old disabled man who discovers his mom has started an Only Fans. I was inspired by the fact that Denice Richards (she is a C-list actress that was married to Charlie Sheen) started one with her daughter, and a friend of mine who mentioned he was disabled. This is going to be a really epic story and fairly long about how their relationship changes as a result.
I thought I would ask the people who read my blog to send me their idea of a synopsis of a story (knowing what stories I write) of what you'd like to see.
I've considered doing something like a historical fantasy recently, but I am not convinced I can pull off "Action Adventure". I am still futzing with that idea.
The three ideas I have on my hot list are as follows (but I'll consider anything)
1 - Story set in the 1960s, involving domestic discipline. I was thinking about a situation where the parents are fairly strict right off the bat, two sons, two daughters, lots of red butts, and not a lot of BDSM.
They'd be strict but loving, so it's not going to be abusive, but there would be alot of bare asses and such.
I've never done a story set in that time period. I Was wondering if it might be fun to use sort of a "Mad Men" idealized 1960s setting with scotch, and business suits.
2- A female led relationship story. There are not a lot of good ones of these out there. Games by ByDaSea is the only one I know of on SOL. Femdom/FLR stories often focus on 'cuckold' where the woman is a nympho who wants an excuse to fuck anyone but her husband. My experience is that most FLR the women simply want their husband to worship them as their queen and are the dominants in the relationship.
If you were to write a male character the way most female dominants in femdom stories, people would consider the male a narcissistic sociopath. I want a loving FLR - but with lots of bdsm/humiliation.
I would probably set the story with a retired man, who is with his wife in an RV. His two adult sons, and a daughter are there as well. He is former military, used to getting this his own way, blusters and yells when he gets mad.
The wife and her friend confront him with new rules, but there is no blackmail or coercion. They simply want him to accept that the wife is in charge. He is reluctant and skeptical but agrees and this would be a story about their adventures on the road.
Third story: The story begins in the DMV with a woman talking to her co-worker.
"The only person that can order me around is my kid, haha" she jokes.
"What?" he is shocked.
"My eight year old. It's just easier to do what she wants. Yesterday she got a notion to unravel all the toilet paper. I just said, 'whatever'"
Fast forward 8 years later. The daughter is a blue-eyed, blonde hair, snot-nosed brat (which may irritate some readers) who runs her mom, older brother, and older sister. If she doesn't get her way her tantrums are legendary. She sleeps in the master bedroom because she has 'allergies' and can't be in the smaller room, she drives moms car, mom has the second hand car, won't be caught dead in cheap clothes.
Mom has lost every relationship she ever could have had, bedraggled, brother and sister are worn down too.
Story begins. "Get that off, you look hideous, mom!"
"Okay Angelica, I just thought it.."
"You thought what? that you'd embarrass me today? Take it off right now..."
"I'll go to my room and change. Did you have.."
"No, here in the kitchen!"
"What?"
"Are you hard of hearing. Do it"
This is where it begins. I could make it kind of obvious that the woman gets off on it, whether she admits it or not.
To each their own, and the good thing about SOL is there is something for everyone. If you like stories about dinosaurs getting it on, or magic goats, short stories, medium stories, long stories, REALLY long stories, etc.
This site really amazes me sometimes. I find myself increasingly addicted to checking the updates to see what's new. I know there is a whole fantastic archive larger than the scholars of the great library of Alexandria could have fathomed dating back for decades of filth and perversion I could read.
Yet, I am constantly looking for the latest greatest. Mostly because I've identified a few authors like Vulgus, MaryS,Vanessa Evans, Tail Weaver, Mike McGifford etc that turn my screws so I want to see if there is new stuff from them.
Lately, it's been a bit of a drought for old Eddie. No one's fault really - authors write what they want.
I did want to express an opinion on short stories, and It's not intended as a rant or to demean anyone who loves them - just my opinion.
I recently came up with an analogy about short stories
It's like sex with my wife.
She likes how I begin.
However, it ends before she gets anything out of it.
I can't bring myself to write short stories. If I care enough about the characters to write about them - I've got to see it through at least 6 or 7 chapters of about 9-11 pages typed each.
That's probably about 40,000 words, which does sound like a lot but to get a proper start, middle and end I need at least that much to give it a go.
They say a picture is worth 1,000 words. I've found a single picture on the Internet sometimes that tells an entire short story inside of the photo.
I've thought about trying my hand at it. Just pick some photo and then start writing and try to keep it under 1,000 words. I just can't seem to do it.
Every time I sit down and do it, I begin to viscerally live the character's experience and I just don't want to stop, or else they were never interesting or real enough to write about.
I've had people recently tell me they don't have the attention span for long stories. I told them I don't write or read a long story in one sit. I just take it in bite size steps - do a little and come back.
it's not much different than 10 episodes on Netflix of your favorite tv show. I watch 1 episode, maybe 2 and then come back and see what happens. Some people binge watch all 10 and that may be what people think they have to do with the long stories.
Just try a chapter, see what happens, maybe you love it, maybe you don't. My goal is to make you want to come back and find out what happens.
I can't do that with a short story.
Anyway, read and write on whatever you like. Please don't take this blog post as a condemnation of your tastes. I am just saying mine which means all of shit.
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