Eddie Davidson: Blog

Yesterday was a real crazy day for Chapter 9 of Cunt Next Door. I will say that I am pleasantly surprised that so many people took the time to let me know that I fucked up with that chapter.

That wasn't my intention by any means, but what I think it also says is that Cunt Next Door is a really special story. I fuck up all the time and people almost never bother to let me know. This time I had quite a few nice people take the time. it was like their TV set suddenly went on the fritz during a favorite show.

The last issue was related to HTML not playing well with formatting codes from MS Word. I've fixed that in the latest update and added chapter 10.

in the meantime, I ALSO completed writing a story about a wife and her journey of submission. The general premise was that a husband and wife are giving each other midnight confessions in bed. The wife admits she would like to do humiliating and naughty dares.

The husband responds "Really? If we do this, you have to do whatever I say!"

"Wow! okay" the wife responds and off they go. Naturally, as I wrote the actual story though I found myself adding the complications of fantasies getting in the way of real life with jobs, kids, bills, groceries and the fun that also entails of being able to push some of that aside.

it's a fun 10 chapter story that I'll post up after Cunt Next Door.

In the meantime, I am left with some choices of side projects. One thought I had was to try to write a 'short story'.

I use quotes because the last time I tried to do that I ended up writing TWO stories about the family, and 50+ chapters in "Keeping the Entire Family In Line" because I liked the characters so much.

I was thinking that I may just take an unusual picture and start writing a vignette of sorts around what I think the context was of the picture.

That or maybe a "Day in the life" story. It begins with the main character waking up and ends with them falling asleep on a typical day. It doesn't have the "Act 1/Act 2/Act 3" format of a typical story where something surprising happens that leads the character on a journey.

It may just be a British mum and her nudist family off for Holiday in Cornwall, and be about packing sandwiches and how they sunned their buns on the Southern shores of Saint Ives. No blackmail, no life altering events, no mind control, no plot other than a fun day with the family.

It could just as easily be a big titted woman and her two big titted daughters in the trailer park, and how they spend their day, walking up to the store, looking out their patio, drinking a few beers, masturbating, etc.

Many short stories seem to be able to just tell the story of a pretty typical day and let you be a fly on the wall/see out of the main character's eyes. I've never been able to write one successfully. I was thinking perhaps it would be a good exercise for me.

Is that something you would like?

I also have plans to finish a few loose ends (NIS Summer Camp, Visiting Aunt Scarlet) and possibly re-explore Gladiator Brothel.

A few weeks ago I asked if people would be interested in a story about a woman that gets involved in an underground fight club called the "Gladiator Brothel" because wealthy patrons pay to be able to create the conditions of the battle and which women they want to be in it.

I started writing and realized that I suck at action/adventure and writing the gritty and visceral brutality of what combat between two sexy women might be like. It's not just two dudes with tits. There is a whole different vibe to girl fights that I wanted to capture.

I just lacked the skill to really do it. I still want to see the story, not sure if I am the one to write it.

I am open to suggestions/feedback and thoughts.

If you were able to hear me speak you would know that the first word was pronounced /Paul-ish/ which is what I attempted to do to "Cunt Next Door. The second use of the word was pronounced /Pole-ish/ which is how I like my single-moms dancing.

In any case, I don't know what kind of fuck up I had today on chapter nine of cunt next door. It was royal though.

I've had multiple errors. Here is the root of one of them; Mike and I worked on this together and there are times when a revised chapter sort of got folded into the flow of the story.

As I polish (the paul-ish kind) the story and add little details, embellish, and fix grammatical mistakes I missed key points when the entire text repeats between chapters.

The text seemed to fit nicely in both chapters.

My old process was to write a chapter and publish it IMMEDIATELY. I was so happy to share my stories that I'd just publish it as soon as I finished editing it.

However, my new process is to *COMPLETELY* finish a story and then go back and edit it, add illustrations and publish it.

What I am learning is that my memory sucks, and I am running into a new and unanticipated problem months after the chapter was written. I am hoping today's chapter nine was a one-time occurrence but thank you to the readers who are enjoying the story and pointed out the problems.

There were a couple others (chapter 3 somehow got copied into chapter 9). In any case, I think it is sorted now and there is NEW content in the final revised chapter nine, so if you read it earlier today, you may want to go back and double check.

Thanks!

I am not sure how the snafu happened, but thank you to the readers who pointed out chapter three was inadvertently posted twice in place of chapter nine.

I have already uploaded the correct file and I ask that you check back later. You can see the 'updated by' date will have changed in the upper right hand side when Lajeez or his webminions make the update.

In other news, I am finishing up a fun 11 part story about a woman who embraces her submission. It's called "I am bored of me"

I wanted to basically explore what it would be like if during midnight confessions with her husband she said "It turns me on to be told what to do, and to streak..."

The husband would respond with "Okay, but if we do this, you REALLY have to do what I say!"

"Really? You'd be into it?"

and then off I went writing what I feel is a fun, light hearted story with no blackmail, reluctance, or any real 'twist' - just a straight forward women who was tired of being a boring mom and wife, and who embraced her fantasies in a healthy and happy way.

I plan to get back to wrapping up NIS: Nude at Summer Camp. It was never intended to sit so long. My apologies. I just have one more chapter planned.

I will also try my hand at a couple short stories. I do not normally do those, but I'll see what I can do.

I've checked on the "Editor's wanted" board and I thought I'd make a blog post as well.

I am always on the lookout for a possible editor.

I had one that was PERFECTION. He cleanly and efficiently helped me with editing by proof reading and helped me triage grammatical goofs and story holes.

I do not like using external email so I'd just send it to him here on SOL and he'd come back with his suggestions and it worked like clockwork.

I miss that help and if anyone is up for it - I'd love it. I would suggest reading a few recent stories my existing catalog if you aren't familiar with my work to see what themes I write about. They tend to be longer stories that focus on character growth/relationships within a BDSM situation and include kinks/humiliation. That's a gross over simplification though. My inspiration is Vulgus if you are familiar with his work.

However, even if I cannot find a willing proof-reader/editor - what I could also use is a good sounding board to read some of my latest stories while they are in edit and offer feedback/suggestions. It's so hard to work in a bubble. Writing can be a very solitary exercise. I enjoy collaborative efforts, or at the very least someone saying "What about?"

I tend to finish writing a story completely before I start publishing it, so it is a slow process but I often produce a chapter a day. Is that something anyone might be interested in helping with?

You'd have access to the story before it is published, which means that the final version may be changed by the time you see it posted.

I'd like to keep it strictly here though on SOL email for privacy reasons.

I recently concluded "Cum Dumpster: Mom has an only fans".

There is really only two options to end a story. One is to end on a positive note with a conclusion "They all live happily ever after" and the other is to end on a cliff hanger.

I find the cliff hanger is seldom satisfying.

As an author, You want the characters to grow and develop and show that they learned something. They might be ready for another adventure but it is important to learn when to end a story.

I was once told "Think of the most interesting time in someone's life and write about that time".

I did that for Jerry. I wrote about how his relationship with his mom evolved and blossomed. I was criticized at first because many found him to be cruel to his mom.

That was intentional. I wrote it so that Jerry would feel guilty and so I could write how the mom felt she was the cruel one. She was enjoying this new relationship so much that she felt she was abandoning him as his mom to live out a fantasy. Those who stuck with the story long enough to understand that was the central theme of the story I hope walked away with that.

It was a wonderful story to write, and I feel like there could easily be a NEW adventure for Jerry. I would encourage anyone who liked the characters to play with it and write a fan fiction continuation.

I've been working on finishing my short Naked in School story (naked in summer camp). I have also started publishing Mike McGifford's brilliant "Cunt Next Door" story.

Imagine finding out your mother has been living as a sex slave next door for the last six months? you'd want answers. This is another story though that delves into the power exchange of the relationship. Mike writes far better than me, so it's a thrill to be able to wrap it up. There wont be a ton of pictures included with this story. Just a few.

I've got several other stories I've been working on. The gladiator brothel story idea hit some snags. I just don't write convincing fight scenes (IMHO) and I was unhappy with the direction of the story. Hopefully I will write something that sparks and inspires interest.