Eddie Davidson: Blog

Two chapters left to "Itty Bitty Titty Committee" - hopefully you enjoyed the ride.

I apologize for the short break. I had an unexpected computer melt-down.

The next story is "Daredevil Mom"- I think today I'll post a preview chapter. It's a story about a woman who loves doing dares and sees nothing wrong if they are a bit naughty. She has fun with it, and the sillier they are the better. She considers it a bit like granting wishes.

She also has an open marriage as a hot wife and her husband is fine with it - or is he?

There are four bonus chapters at the end of this story! I think it is one of my best!

I challenged myself to write a two chapter short story.

I don't generally enjoy those because just when I fall in love with the characters the story is over - sort of like unfulfilling sex. Just when it gets going somebody squirts and it ends.

I fudged a little though.

I used existing characters from an epic story called "You bet your ass". I would say this event happens somewhere after a few chapters in the main story as something left out by the main character before the "Big bet" toward the end.

This is a two chapter story - I made a deal with myself that I wouldn't turn it into an epic. That is how "Keeping the entire family in line" happened. I was working on a vignette to insert into a collection of stories with a friend about a submissive couple that wanted to meet a new dom for the first time and voila - 50+ chapters later I was finished.

I have been saving pictures in a folder that seem to tell a story all by themselves. I picked five pictures and decided to pick TWO of them and write the story around those photos. It was incredibly helpful as a creative excercise.

If this story wets your appetite for "You Bet Your Ass" I highly recommend it - it will provide some context for why the family is so unusual and used to the mom and sister making bets when Mark the babysitter arrives.

Mark has been babysitting his brothers for years and just recently started babysitting on the side for money - so he is in for a treat.

I may go back to some of my other stories that people seem to enjoy like HOA and Do you have a big dick why not and see if I can write a short story like this to add to it.

Simple question. Do you want me to slow down posting?

28 chapters, a lot of work.

I am hoping it was a fun read, especially for fans of mind control stories. I hope the ending will be satisfying and that I possibly see other stories of this same type in the future.

I'd certainly encourage anyone to fan fiction the hell out of these characters with their own story set a after this one concludes (or even during if that's your jam). You have my total permission to do that with literally any of my stories.

I've tried to keep the pace up to post a chapter every day - is that good or bad for most people?

Is it sort of a "Too fast!" or a binge read?

I recently found a website that had pretty much every erotic graphic novel that has ever been made, and there are certainly other story sites on the Internet.

However, I just can't seem to say enough good things about this one.

Sure, there are some areas of improvement but the interface and way this site works - it "just works"

It's got a great searching and author tools, and it makes it easy to write.

I have posted on other sites but it was years ago but this is not only my home base, it's pretty much my exclusive one.

I recently discovered a tool to help me proof read my own stories, and I went into Tig's Mind Control and started fixing some back-chapters. It was mostly comma missing here or there, but a few times where I had an extra word or a missing one and MS Word just didn't let me know.

SOL made is SUPER easy to repost those chapters and make the corrections, and that's something other sites often aren't set up to do (unless you are editing what is essentially a forum post yourself).

I am hopeful that going forward my new chapters will be a lot cleaner and easier to read.

I just wanted to say thanks to the Webmaster and his Webminions and to all the people who contribute in one form or another on SOL. You inspire me to keep writing, thank you.