Eddie Davidson: Blog

Many apologies for the delays in publishing new chapters of NIS: Breeder Story.

The story is complete, but editing is what takes so much time. Today's chapter is almost twice as long as most, measuring in at around 12,000 words.

To give you some context, that's about 70kb of space on average, and last I checked there were more than 38,000 entire stories on SOL that were 70kb or less.

It took some time to write the chapter, and polish some of the AI art. I am getting much better at it, and I add my own flourishes manually as well as create the captions.

My goal there is to simply enhance the story by giving a few visuals without making the pictures THE story.

This arc in the series takes Julie and her mother out of the high school and into a trailer park. That's a familiar playground for me to write in. I grew up in one, and all sorts of debauched and naughty things happened to me in them while I did.

Arguably, a story about a high school program should be focused on the high school setting and this one certainly does. However, I have always enjoyed the home life stories about the participants.

I like the dirty little brother who laughs and points, or the concerned neighbor who stares awkwardly scenarios. I like the odd circumstances when people visit and find that the participants are home nudists as well.

The "Exchange" nights provided an opportunity for the participants in the Breeder program to visit each other's houses and observe how they live, even participant in how things work at their house.

That speaks to Julie, and I am hoping the twists in chapter 58 will make the wait worth it.

This is a pivotal chapter in the story that alters a lot of dynamics. Piggy is starting to show and soon she'll be full blown pregnant with engorged tits full of milk. That will be another corner in the story.

However, this one is going to change some of the way they approach NIS all together. If it were a TV show, I'd have saved this chapter for a "Season finale", even though it is not the closure of the story. It ends with some interesting questions about what will happen next.

In other news, I am writing the New Foal: A pony girl story.
https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story

I had a long time reader say that it was not a mother-daughter story, since so much is about the mother and her feelings. The mother is telling the story and it is definitely the two of them partnered.

Most pony girl stories I read are set in a fantasy world where women can be abducted and then trained into show ponies, or they may agree to be paid by some rich weirdo to give up a year of their life and live on the ranch.

I wanted a different kind of story. I wanted a story about a couple who happen to be into BDSM and specifically into pony play. I wanted to show the reader that it could be normalized in their household - "this is just what mom and dad do on weekends"

And as their son and daughter grow up, they naturally have questions and interests of their own.

I've tried to do things differently than many of my stories in the past. One thing I did, that I sort of regret was start publishing it before I had an ending.

That puts the pressure on me to keep up the pace of writing and not leave the readers hanging. I will caveat this story with: "I can't publish a chapter until it is ready, and I won't."

So, be prepared for a bit of a wait, or just give me the time to finish it before you start on it.

I started with the intent of teasing a new story. I typically don't post until I have written the entire thing.

However, I made an exception simply because I was so excited about this new story to share it with you.

I chose a LORA (persistent character) for the Mom in this story that I thought would be cool, but I am having some difficulties with making pictures with it.

I decided to make a "casting change" of sorts, so soon you will see a revision to chapter three

https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story/3

If you see an updated date for today or later, that's the new character/chapter. If not, please enjoy the previous Carmen until then.

I have asked for consideration not to vote until I reach Chapter seven. I do thank the people that gave the story high marks, but if you are planning a down vote - please give me until chapter seven with this story to make an opinion on it.

Honestly, I wish authors could decide when people can vote, because chapter one is never enough to make a decision. There must be a point in the reading where you know it's going to interest you and it's usually not the cover, chapter one, or the foreward.

In any case, I also posted up the next chapter of NIS.

Chapter 55 represents an "arc" in the story. You could almost consider it complete with Piggy's birthday party. It's going to get bumpy on this ride after ths point. There are many twists and turns ahead.

Time for a quick update on what I am working on. I doubt anyone really gives a fuck, but here goes my brain dump;

I am finishing editing NIS: Breeder Program first.

https://storiesonline.net/n/33623/nis-breeder-program

It's up to 53 chapters, 330,328 words, and has 80,000 downloads. I have a total of 75 chapters and I plan to publish another this evening.

I considered writing a little more, a vignette here and there to stick in as the story progresses. It would be something plot neutral that does nothing to alter the trajectory of character relationships. It simply covers a trip to the store, or a jog, or sex with her husband. It would be written from Piggy's POV, and just add more detail to the world.

I've noticed with some authors they tend to use an economy of words. They try to tell the story in as few words as needed. I am quite the opposite. I get off on writing.

I might spend an entire chapter or two on a meal or a party that could be covered in a few paragraphs. I want the reader to experience the smells, the sounds, the excitement, feel the warmth of the candles and taste the cake. I want the reader to be there with me and the main character on this journey through her eyes and experiences.

A lofty goal, but that's what I am trying to do.

I once said:
Am I the best writer?
NO.
Am I trying to be?
Also, no.

But, I try to do what is within my capacity as a story teller. I try to write as if I am sitting across from someone in a bar shooting the shit and telling them a story. It needs to be engaging and about the most exciting time in their lives and nothing else.

In Piggy's case, this is a transformative story and I could have written 75 MORE chapters about her life.

In some NIS Purist's case, I've been told it is not an NIS story. They have a very narrow definition that involves certain tropes/mary sues and styles of writing that I did not do.

I postulated, what if Nude in school was so normalized, that most people simply accepted it and so now we've moved on to normalizing sexuality and by extension fetishes. I wanted to establish that kink shaming was up there with racism/homophobia in the culture as something that people generally frowned upon.

I wish the world was like that, but it's still not ready to allow people to openly live in a Dominant/Submissive relationship (for example. Too many people think it is abusive/stripping the submissive of something. They don't understand the value of submission to a submissive who simply wants to submit - they get joy out of service and giving.

I wrote a story where they modeled that type of relationship in the Program.

It's finished, complete. However, I will certainly appreciate someone writing fan fiction about the other characters or continuing the story. I will certainly even entertain if someone wants to ghost write a short plot neutral vignette, and inserting it into the story. Send me your idea first though.

That's my main priority.

In addition, I have the New Foal: A Pony Girl Story.
https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story

Man, this is a fun story to write and illustrate. It's less lofty than the NIS story. It's about a family that engages in BDSM, but the kids really weren't a part of it - they were aware their parents had an interest in pony play. I am on chapter 7, I've posted about four chapters as of this blog.

I normally write the ENTIRE story and then start publishing it, but I wanted to tease it. I was so excited about it.

I also have Visiting Aunt Scarlet.
https://storiesonline.net/s/23522/visiting-aunt-scarlet

This one sat fallow for years. it was originally a few chapters that Mike McGifford wrote and abandoned. I thought it was so brilliant that I asked to put an ending to it. I thought I could do that in a few chapters.

Instead, I let it sit and sit for a few years and finally decided to start illustrating it and publishing it.

It's a back to basics story for me. A woman and her son are visiting her sister. The sister is an escort that works out of her house. I am up to chapter 16. It isn't the most popular story, but like it's red-headed titular character, it is literally my red headed step child story.

I plan to finish this one slowly. It has some interesting twists ahead. It's another that could have 30+ more chapters after the final twist, but I think I will have taken it as far as I can.

I also have Humiliation Games.

https://storiesonline.net/s/31718/humiliation-games

The name is sort of a play on the Hunger Games. I wanted to write about an alternate universe where women are considerered second class, so much so that some of them are food when they served out their usefulness.

In our world, it's silly to think of a dog or cat wearing clothes, and most people who put clothes on a dog or cat seem a little strange to us.

In that world, the same is true for women. I wrote a little into the story though the tale to establish where their history and ours diverged and how it was largely a backlash from the age of Kim Kardashian and the bimbofication of women into superstars that led to some sort of pendulum swing hard to the other direction.

It's also implied on some level that the gruel they eat keeps them stupid and compliant.

This is a fairly short story that I never intended to write a lot on, and it's mostly complete. it just needs editing.

Which leads me to my next project on the horizon.

I've been horny for Morgan Fairchild since I was old enough to hold my pecker up and not fall over on to my face.

I definitely want to include a character that looks a lot like her in this AI and I've already created a very possible Lora to do that. You can expect someone with her features in this next story.

I've got two ideas, one is a mother who simply cannot be embarrassed. She likes sex, she makes no secret of it. Her husband is confident and knows his wife is insatiable. Her daughters and son are sometimes embarrassed by how open the mother is about her desires/wears fishnets around the house.

In this story, we go back to basics. I just want to do an "embarrassed nude female" story.

The classic genre set in the real world, where there is a room full of clothed people and one or two nude females. A lot of streaking/accidental nudity, intentional.

I would probably arrange in that story to incorporate some "new rules" from mom to get her daughters out of their shells and make them stop being such fuddy-duddies and learn to seek pleasure in stead of worrying so much about what people think about them.

The other idea, is to revisit "Itty Bitty Titty Committee"

https://storiesonline.net/s/28240/itty-bitty-titty-committee

For that story, I channelled the late 1970s-1980s when flat-chested girls might be seen wearing a t-shirt or tube-top that said "itty bitty titty committee",

It was a time when, I remember visiting a very old relative, and she might have a cup shaped like a penis in the cupboard, or a statuette of a man with a trench coat on the table. if you press the button, the coat opens and his penis pops out. People used to give each other stuff like that as a gag gift. It was so normal to me at the time, that I miss it.

I started the story in classic ENF fashion:
Daughter is growing/budding and yet the mom doesn't see it. She tries to make her wear a matching one piece that her little sister is wearing.
However, her tits pop out and pubes show on the side in the front.
The mom acts like it's no big deal, but insists she start shaving.

The family goes on vacation, and catches her sunbathing nude. As a punishment "You might have been seen!"
"But I wasn't, mom!"
"well, since you want to be naked so bad and don't care what the neighbors think if they DID see you, you'll place both hands on the fence and stand out in the yard for an hour. Maybe then you will think twice about flashing your little boobies"
"MAWWWMMM!"
"Okay, TWO hours!"

I wanted to do the classic scenes where the mom insists on rubbing her down with suntan lotion ALL over on the beach, and some boys are perving and giggling because it looks like mom is feeling her up, and she blushes.

However, I kind of went overboard on that story and introduced some aspects that put the story over the top. I won't spoil it for you, and it's a fun read as well it's sequel but I think I could go back to that formal of classic ENF and write something about a flat-chested girl and her big titty cousin that summer doing dares up in the tree house.

So, that's where my head is/priorities are. If you have thoughts, or ideas, I am all ears. I love collaborative and creative feedback.

https://storiesonline.net/a/eddie-davidson

All of my stories are located here. I have seventy two stories. I've never added up all the readers and stats, but some of these stories are quite long.

NIS: Breeder is the longest, weighing in at 75 chapters, with room for more.

Many of my early stories were not edited very well, and not illustrated. I did not even own MS Word when I started.

I was maligned, teased, insulted by many of the toxic people who come here primarily to scare off new authors before they can establish themselves.

One of them said "If you were going for the narrative voice of an airhead, you nailed it!!" as a passive aggressive way to tell me I was an idiot.

I think that's what prompted my disgust with people who seem to make it their mission to be toxic here. If you saw my recent "Continuing adventures of the reader who refuses to read story codes" blog post, you'll know what I mean.

I have improved. I've gotten better at illustrating stories. I have a few friends that deserves a lot of credit for helping me (Omega Pet) as an editor and Mike McGifford who is a regular source of inspiration.

I think without the two of them, I might have called it quits.

I have better tools to help me spell check. I have AI tools to illustrate my stories.

I probably started my stride with

https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

"Do you have a big dick, why not?"

It's one of my most popular stories to date, and people still write me about it. It's a story of a young kid who meets a quiet, shy girl at his school.

It turns out, at home she webcams with her older sister and mom. The mom says the titular line "Do you have a big dick?" implying that unless he has cocaine, money or a big cock, then why waste her time talking to her/she isn't interested.

It's a line I heard an actual stripper say in a night club one night.

She's an aging former stripper, and she raised her daughters to give zero fucks.

It was a fun story with a sequel that I think left those characters in a good place. I always intended to go back and add to it with an update on the main character's younger brother and younger sister.

I've since written dozens of stories, and they are all there - steadily trying to post frequently (sometimes daily).

My current story "NIS: Breeder Program"

https://storiesonline.net/n/33623/nis-breeder-program

Is complete, and 75 chapters. The longest I've ever written. My chapters are 12-15 pages typed, so they aren't tiny. I am just polishing and editing.

I've been working on a pony girl story, and another one called "Visiting Aunt Scarlet" that's about a woman and her son visiting her sister, who works as a prostitute from her home. It's kind of a fun story.

however, the pony girl story really excites me. I posted up a teaser chapter here;

https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story

I may add another chapter to it, but I am trying to focus on getting the other two completed.

I wanted to mention that I have recently discovered that I have 999 followers. I've been teetering around that number for a really long time. You can 'follow' me from my author page at the top of the blog.

What that does is a mystery to me. I assume it notifies you somehow of my new stories and may put them automatically in your library.

I am reminded me of the narrator in Disney's haunted house. "We have 999 happy haunts here, but there's room for a thousand. Any volunteers?"

They have some of the best literary minds, and their library is well stocked with priceless first editions - only ghost stories written by ghost writers of course."

If you like my recent stories, and are bored waiting for me to post up new chapters, can I suggest taking a look at my back catalog?

I have a lot of similar stories, but also stuff set in the Civil War, I even wrote fan fiction set in a mod in Civilization IV.

Red woke up around 9am.

He logged into the story site that he frequently checked for new erotic literature.

He never paid for a membership to support the cost of running the site, or contributed stories. "Someone else can do that!"

Then he angrily started clicking around the site, and complained about how there weren't many new stories. He chose a story without reading the story codes or description. "Why would I waste time doing that?" he asked the empty room, as he started skimming the story.

The author was new to SOL. It was their first time posting a story. They spent hours working on this first chapter. It was part of a 25 chapter story arc that they wanted to share. They received no compensation for their work other than the satisfaction of knowing they were providing something of value and giving back to the community.

Their editor had spent hours checking over the story, offering advice, and helping the new author.

The author carefully chose all the relevant codes and offered a detailed description of the story, which was about Arthur Morgan's continuing adventures in the Red Dead Redemption Video Game world of the late 1890s. The codes implied this would be a raunchy story full of hot sex, and began with Arthur meeting his long lost love Mary Linton.

She's now a prostitute working in the decadent saloons of Saint-Denis. The hand crafted story is well-researched and references many of the events in the video game that led to the fallen angel's new career.

Red bangs his fist on the keyboard.

"I didn't come on here to read stories about VIDYA GAMES!! THIS ISN'T MY CUP OF TEA!! 6/10" he down votes AND comments based on the first chapter. "This isn't even a story!! It's just the start of one!!!"

Red feels safe in the knowledge that he is providing a valuable service to burgeoning new authors by tearing their new story a second a-hole, and downvoting them to discourage them from continuing.

Red goes to the next new story. Instead of waiting until chapter seven to get a good idea of what this one was about, he down votes it immediately because he doesn't like that author.

"He never writes anything that I like! So I will punish him by giving him a ONE!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!" he says to the empty room with his flaccid penis in his hand.

"Now, when new people come to the site and they are looking for a quality story, they will see this author's hard work, and think it must be terrible," he laughs nefariously over the power he feels he has. He also downvotes it with his second account he created specifically to downvote stories with.

It doesn't matter to Red that voting should really be objective based on the quality of the story. He doesn't like stories that involve fetishes that aren't his particular kink, and wants them to all die a death of misery.

It would be easy for him to avoid them, but Red doesn't bother with story codes. "Those are for wussies," he laments.

He now feels the need to go to each story on the site that contains fetishes that make him uncomfortable and down vote them.

Meanwhile, on the other side of town, Blue is reading a story he enjoyed and not bitching about it, because he fucking looked for the story codes that he likes, and read the description first.

Don't be Red, get Blown.

EDIT:

Today, I saw a guy write that comment "NOT MY CUP OF TEA 6/10" on an author's first chapter of their first story posted on SOL, and it sort of fired me up.

It seemed like he was just trying to encourage the author to stop, when it was obvious that the guy didn't read the codes or he would have known it wasn't his "cup of tea". They wrote precisely what they described in the codes/story description.

In addition, not bagging on free users who use the site without contributing stories. It's an option. It was more the fact that he expects so much for something he pays nothing for that stuck in my craw.

Pay nothing, Do nothing, expect nothing.

Most free users are cool people, and not like Red at all.