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Reposting an older chapter, a combination of a few corrections and expansion of the section with Eleska.

If you've already read it, there's nothing critical changed, it's just a bit better than the first version.

CH

Or, I sent a comment to Boss Man asking for a special code for "small breasts"...and he set it up!

So, in Trudi's honour, the fetishing of small breasts can be celebrated, coded, and searched for.

You know, I've now a real feeling there's going to be a section where Trudi complains to Simon how she's stopped growing and, of course, she'll have to let him take a look to make sure, all in the name of biological science, of course...

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Coding.

I kinda coded for the elements, though, if you've been reading the earlier chapters, you'll know that none of the actions in the story as a extreme or overt as what happens in the story itself. Ah well, maybe they'll snag me some new readers?

Also, I didn't notice a code for Trudi's tits. Small, with skin-pale areolae is kinda her 'thing' and it would be nice if she could be recognised as such. Ah well. I'll maybe suggest a 'small tits' code and be done with that.

Hope you enjoy,
CH

So, after Vernon's conversation with Simon, a breath of fresh air enters his life and everything starts to change.

Which in practical terms means the first draft of the next chapter is about done, around 20,000 words in length, and bringing pretty much almost everyone into the fold as well as delivering a surprise or two. I'll leave it to sit in my subconscious for a day or two and then be back into it before the end of the week.

All of which means, whilst no promises are made, it should be in the queue by this time next week.

CH

For those who read so far back and remember - and it will become clear that it matters in the next chapter - I've gone back into chapter 2 and re-described Eleska in new terms. I wanted to take her in a different direction, and needed a new image for her. Nothing too dramatic other than a little weight loss and a change of hair colour.