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Coding.

I kinda coded for the elements, though, if you've been reading the earlier chapters, you'll know that none of the actions in the story as a extreme or overt as what happens in the story itself. Ah well, maybe they'll snag me some new readers?

Also, I didn't notice a code for Trudi's tits. Small, with skin-pale areolae is kinda her 'thing' and it would be nice if she could be recognised as such. Ah well. I'll maybe suggest a 'small tits' code and be done with that.

Hope you enjoy,
CH

So, after Vernon's conversation with Simon, a breath of fresh air enters his life and everything starts to change.

Which in practical terms means the first draft of the next chapter is about done, around 20,000 words in length, and bringing pretty much almost everyone into the fold as well as delivering a surprise or two. I'll leave it to sit in my subconscious for a day or two and then be back into it before the end of the week.

All of which means, whilst no promises are made, it should be in the queue by this time next week.

CH

For those who read so far back and remember - and it will become clear that it matters in the next chapter - I've gone back into chapter 2 and re-described Eleska in new terms. I wanted to take her in a different direction, and needed a new image for her. Nothing too dramatic other than a little weight loss and a change of hair colour.

Finally finished.

This has been a slightly vexing chapter in that the plot requires it in order for the following chapters to make sense, otherwise Simon's changed values and new motivations are too much of a switch from his previously stated positions.

Hence the delay in getting it out.

It might get reviewed in the future, but, for now, it's as done a deal as it will get.

Now, time to get the cleaners in for the next chapter...

The next installment, and a slight change of pace for this chapter, sees me doing the final edit to it today.


So, Test Match Special on the radio, a generous box of snuff on my desk, and copious distractions from my puppies no doubt going to takeplace, it should be in the submission queue later today.

UPDATE: After getting into the opening section, it seems as though there is more work needed than I remembered after I finished the second draft a couple of weeks back. Posting now likely to be as late as Tuesday next.


CH