Clee Hill: Blog

The next chapter is in the submission queue, so hopefully it'll be live soon.

This time round, Luke and Stef go shopping, Luke for swim trunks, and Stef for bikinis and underwear, with Luke gaining a whole new concept demonstrated, the 'mirror selfie', as taken in the changing rooms.

And The Thing he bought keeps making noises...

NB: This is where things start moving, though so far the sex is offstage...

As I'm self-editing and self-proofing (yeah, I know) if anyone spots any goofs, please let me know.

Cheers...CH

Having seen how popular the first chapter of The Wilhelm Scream has been, it has made me reconsider The Pipesmoker & The Schoolgirl, specifically, whether the chapters should be shorter and this should be made into a single book.

My thinking is that shorter chapters are easier to read, easier to write, and might prompt me to continuing their adventures sooner rather than later, as light relief from Wilhelm.

Thoughts, anyone?

Wow, did I get a positive response to chapter 1. So many readers and emails and positive scores. My thanks to all!

So, I'm just about to do the final pass on chapter 2, which is quite a bit longer than chapter 1, but some of that is introducing the kids' parents and setting more of the scene between them all. It also features a shopping trip, but it's a good one, honest. Poor Luke, he really doesn't see things coming unless they're really close up.

Anyhoo, everything's on schedule, and chapter 2 should be uploaded sometime on Sunday.

Salut!
CH

Just dropped the first chapter of a new story into the queue, getting into how it is to have a hot older sister, plus what it means to have bought a mechanical device from a charity shop.

This is the first chapter of a long story, probably closing out at twenty to thirty chapters in length, with a planned release schedule of once every two to three weeks.

Unlike the story of Simon and Trudi, there is a definite end planned for this story, though it might open up into a second book if there's the interest.

Cheers

Reposting an older chapter, a combination of a few corrections and expansion of the section with Eleska.

If you've already read it, there's nothing critical changed, it's just a bit better than the first version.

CH