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Continuing the mountain adventure with the harpy and her hubby!
(by her reckoning anyway XD)
(Forgot to put this in the chapter foreword hehe oops...)
Some people mentioned that the original version of this chapter made it sound like Perra was 12-13 years old, instead of the canonically 17 about to turn 18 in a few months. The rewrite fixes a few smaller issues and has the updated section that removes the impression of her being younger.
Anyone who had downloaded the story don't forget to update this chapter as it is now the "Official" version. :)
Blu
Was out of town the latter part of last week. Unfortunately this means that the next chapter will be a bit late. Just wanted everyone to know I'm still working on it and haven't
disappeared ?
I sincerely hope everyone had a good Valentine's Day and that your day was filled with as much nookie as the stories you read. XD
Just wanted to throw out there that sometimes the weighting system for stories seems brutal at times. It feels like right now it takes three 10 stars to make the score go up .01 only to be brought down by a single 8 star (or 9, I'm not sure). It really makes you appreciate how hard some of the people with 9+ scores on the top 50 lists have worked to get those.
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