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G'day,
In Chapter 1, paragraph 2, the correct spelling is
"led to our descent into disgrace."
"Lead" (when pronounced "led") is a metal,
otherwise the word is pronounced "leed", as in
"lead me not into temptation."
The past form of the verb "to lead" is "led", as
in "she led me astray."
Also "decent" is NOT the same as "descent".
"Decent" generally means good, whereas "descent"
is a path or way down.
Cheers,
Scott
Well hey there Scott. I appreciate the attempts at fix, but... this story was written in ONENOTE. So I don't really care.
But let me say this, if you're looking for work as an editor, there's a section for that on the site. As for my work, if I write it in one note, it's kind of obvious like this with spelling, grammar and etc. errors everywhere.
Take that as you will,
Joshua
we had to laugh...one we could see..but 3 ??? LOL
we thank you....esteban
Dear Esteban,
Glad you are continuing to enjoy my work. I had more ideas for this story or continuations. I may put them down, but haven't decided yet.
Joshua
hi
nice story
any chances to know when the book 2 will be posted
may i know if there will be lactation scene
or
breast feeding scene that is hot
regards
Hi klimstit.
Glad you liked the story.
Book 2 is in the rough draft stages. It will not be posted anytime soon. Book 1 wasn't posted until 1 year after it was finished.
No plans for a lactation scene but definite potential there.
A breast feeding scene is definite, only because Saitx/Joshua's son will play a roll in all of this.
Thanks for the feedback.
--Joshua aka Arquillius
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