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Okay so I just submitted the chapter. It's 9:53 pm PST on 8/19. In the next chapter... I haven't decided what happens. Sorry. I'll post and update when i think of it, or when I get closer to completing it. Chapter 6 is another LONG one.

Okay, you may be wondering "Why is this so long?"

My intention was to make each chapter a single day. I like that format for keeping track of time. If each chapter covers a single day than I can figure that a full pregnacy won't be done in a single chapter. Finding out someone is pregnant could take upto 30 chapters or more, etc.

So chapter 5 covers 2 days. That way we're on Day 6 by the end of the chapter.

Hi readers,

So let's have a chat... I'm going away on vacation for a few days coming in June, so to prepare, I'm cleaning my house, doing my work and trying to get ready for the trip. This is putting a serious delay on all new chapters. I will be taking my writing computer (A windows 98 pc) with me, so i will get the time to write... hopefully.

The trip will be to texas on a 4 day thing for my Honeymoon... part 1 of it, to visit a friend.

Other than that, i'm stuck working so, it's gonna take some time because well... the image I'm attaching will say it all. http://imgur.com/gallery/P6IHv

Anywho, the chapter will take some time, and I hope to get some new inspiration from the locale.

Enjoy what I have put up in the meantime.

Arquillius

I have officially submitted chapter 4.

For a few spoilers, this is a Rachel/Josh heavy chapter with some incite towards the end regarding Joshua's Linage and who Dr. Nitty is.

What I'm planning for chapter 5? Well it's gonna be shorter, that's for sure. 4 was 14 pages because I just had to get in that scene with... well you'll see. Anywho, it'll revolve around Joshua and Heather, that much i'm planning but as rewrites go, I don't know if i'll stick with it.

Signing off for now, cause tired...

R&R all.

Hi all. So let me give you some insight on things.

First, Chapter 4 was written. Key word there, was. In fact, Most of my chapters have been getting one chapter, before I trash most of it, and rewrite it. A little behind on this one though as I had a date night with my wonderful wife tonight.

So what was in the chapter originally that got dumped? What was in other chapters that got dumped? Well Chapter 1 has been the same from point 1. So Besides the update to fix grammar mistakes, it's good. Chapter 2 had a few versions, the first version threw Joshua and Jessi into a situation together, but i decided to leave it for later. Then it had Joshua dealing with Sarah in a much much different way, but I decided I didn't want his character acting like that. The version you can read now is the final version. Chapter 3 had a couple versions too. Originally Cait and Josh were supposed to have a coupling in both the woods, and in his room, but I cut the scene in his room as it comes of more of a blow to not only his mental state, but to his ego to leave him... wanting. Plus he would've been too worn out for Rachel and his mystery visitor. Chapter 4 originally had a scene in the bathroom between him and Becky after she apologized for her attitude, but i scrapped it when it lead where I didn't want it to.

The version you'll be reading will be the final, But I just wanted to tell you about the work that went into these chapters. I'm not just waiting until the last minute to write these. I do research for the clothing and other things from those years... as my memory isn't perfect but I want it to seem natural.

Anyway, read, review and enjoy.

Arquillius