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I wish to thank all of those who voted for my Stories "Magic Ink VII" and "Amelia and Greg" for the Clitorides Awards.
Keep Well
uncle jim
I have added a note at the end of chapter 10 to indicate that it is not the end of the story, just the first book.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
The final chapters open with Max awakening on Sunday evening and going out for an evening meal where he learns that he has been outed by those from the Pentagon.
Max decides to visit the second man on his list first and finds him and others plotting against the citizens of Georgia. Following a sharp rebuke of their intentions, he hangs all of them.
He next visits a judge and find him making a porn video using a young woman. Max intercedes, leaves a message for the police on the video, punishes the stud, and hangs the judge and his paramour.
His final visit for the night turns out to be the mayor's brother, who he also hangs for his crimes.
There is another meeting on Monday where the Mayor learns what else happened over night beside what Max did and just how bad things were while he was distracted by his brother's death. A visit to the Governor brings a curfew and troops.
Also on Monday morning, the veterans are released from the area of their camp.
Max awakens on Monday to find another Magic user watching him. Her name is Jill Kelley and she represents a national Magic users group who are interested in Max joining them. She teaches him some new spells and they go out to eat before leaving Atlanta.
Max stops to retrieve the money and gold that he stashed at the police station near where he used to live. They drive up I-20 to Jill's house in North Charleston, where he spends the night.
This ends the first story in the Injustice series. I am currently working on Injustice II and several other stories. They will appear when they are finished. Thanks for reading this story. I hope that you enjoyed it, and will watch for the following stories in the series.
Keep Well
uncle jim
The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.
This week's chapters open with the Mayor's failed news conference.
Max goes out to eat before that evening's business with Rickey Pontoliano and his men. He uses various spells to eventually learn what they know about those who they helped kidnap his children, which isn't a lot. He gives each of them a final chance to tell him something important to avoid being hanged. He destroys Rickey's offices before departing.
Sunday morning there is another meeting in the Mayor's conference room. The two from the Pentagon enter and reveal that Max is responsible for everything, but distort the truth of why.
Sunday morning, Max transfers to the town where he was arrested, and hides the confiscated gold and money in the police evidence room. He then takes his revenge on the two officers who falsely arrested him and let the kidnapper go. The two from the Pentagon eventually arrive in the town to release the cops with a bit of delusion.
More next week.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
The new chapters have gone to the Moderators for posting.
This week's chapters open with Max starting his recon of the areas where the criminals have their headquarters, both during the day and the night
During the day on Friday, he visits a number of food warehouses to collect food for the veterans over the weekend while he is working.
Friday night he removes the chief pimp and the drug kingpin plus their men while creating quite a disturbance. On Saturday, he continues removing the drug king's locations.
In the mean time, the Mayor and other city officials are are in the dark as to why this is happening and who is the responsible.
More next Friday.
Keep Well,
uncle jim
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