Uncle Jim: Blog

The opening chapters of the new story have been sent to the Moderators.

The story opens with Max awakening in Jill's spare bedroom at her house in North Charleston, South Carolina. Following a good shower, Jill makes him breakfast. During the meal, she fills him in on what occurred in Atlanta after they left the previous evening. She also has an agenda, as she wants to count the money that Max acquired in Atlanta, and he is agreeable to this.

It turns out that Max's estimate was way off. At lunch Jill asks his plans, and learns he needs to hide for a time and learn more Magic. That evening they watch the news from Atlanta. Later she begins teaching him how to control his Talent. At the end of the lessons, Jill leans in and kisses him, startling Max.

Max is upset about this, but Jill understands about grieving. The next day they shop for needed items, especially food, a hair cut and a lockable box.

That evening following the news, Max is speculating on who is behind the trouble in Atlanta, when there is an explosion several blocks down the street from Jill's house. Max goes out to check on it and meets Jill's neighbor. On returning to her house, they discover that Jill is being spied on. They capture the spies before going to Jill's friend Calisa's house, where the explosion occurred. Another woman, Melany, is there with her, and plans are made to move all of them to Jill's relatives in North Carolina.

Injustice II lacks most of the action in the first story, as Max studies Magic and does his best to hide for a while, but trouble is still following him and must be dealt with.

Hope that you enjoy these opening chapters; more next week.

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uncle jim

Injustice II is coming along very nicely, and I should be ready to start posting the first chapters shortly.

There are also several other stories that I have been working on that will appear after Injustice II but before Injustice III. They are Partners, a military story that takes place in the 26th century, and Marianne, a story about a young woman attending the Colorado School of Mines in about the same time period. Both stories have 7 or 8 chapters written already.

There are also so other stories waiting to be worked on, when I have the time.

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uncle jim

I wish to thank all of those who voted for my Stories "Magic Ink VII" and "Amelia and Greg" for the Clitorides Awards.

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uncle jim

I have added a note at the end of chapter 10 to indicate that it is not the end of the story, just the first book.

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uncle jim

The new chapters have been sent to the Moderators for posting.

The final chapters open with Max awakening on Sunday evening and going out for an evening meal where he learns that he has been outed by those from the Pentagon.

Max decides to visit the second man on his list first and finds him and others plotting against the citizens of Georgia. Following a sharp rebuke of their intentions, he hangs all of them.

He next visits a judge and find him making a porn video using a young woman. Max intercedes, leaves a message for the police on the video, punishes the stud, and hangs the judge and his paramour.

His final visit for the night turns out to be the mayor's brother, who he also hangs for his crimes.

There is another meeting on Monday where the Mayor learns what else happened over night beside what Max did and just how bad things were while he was distracted by his brother's death. A visit to the Governor brings a curfew and troops.

Also on Monday morning, the veterans are released from the area of their camp.

Max awakens on Monday to find another Magic user watching him. Her name is Jill Kelley and she represents a national Magic users group who are interested in Max joining them. She teaches him some new spells and they go out to eat before leaving Atlanta.

Max stops to retrieve the money and gold that he stashed at the police station near where he used to live. They drive up I-20 to Jill's house in North Charleston, where he spends the night.

This ends the first story in the Injustice series. I am currently working on Injustice II and several other stories. They will appear when they are finished. Thanks for reading this story. I hope that you enjoyed it, and will watch for the following stories in the series.

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uncle jim