Reltney McFee: Blog

I have submitted Chapter 8 for posting.

A couple of readers have commented on some of the actions Mark and Emily have taken in the course of this imaginary walk across Michigan. Item One, the actions presented seem reasonable to me, given the circumstances posited in the story. Item Two, this chapter may address some of the concerns. Item Three, Thank you for reading, and thank you for getting so engaged in the story as to question actions of the characters.

Thanks to everybody who read this story, and everybody who commented.

Many readers have taken the time to write me about "Emily", and indicated that they wanted more. I have been writing, since I closed the story, and believe that I have three satisfactory chapters completed. I am working on a fourth, and perhaps another will follow that one.

I anticipate posting the next one towards the end of this week (perhaps Thursday, perhaps Friday).

Thank you to everybody who read the story, thank you to the folks were became engaged enough to comment, and thank you, thank you, tank you for the kind comments. Those of you awaiting more of the story, please be confident that I am chewing my way through, and likely will conclude with Our Hero and his entourage arriving at his home. Several chapters from now!

I have just submitted chapter 6, the final chapter, for posting. I hope I cleaned up loose ends.

Thank you to all the folks who commented, and thanks to everybody who read, and voted. (Of course, if you thought one-or more-of my stories might be worthy of a Clitoride nomination, that would be very nice, as well!)

Thank you to all the folks who took the time to leave kind comments. I'm pleased you've enjoyed the story, and hope this and the following, last, chapters similarly entertain you.

Thanks to EspressoBolus for the question regarding why the second medic crew would approach a patrol car. First, what would indicate the protagonist was more injured than the wife? (nothing). Second, what would tip them off that anybody in the patrol car might need them? (nothing). I fixed it, I think, and submitted an edited chapter four.

Thank you, Mr. Bolus!