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I got three chapters posted. I hope you like them. I've pretty much stopped preaching, since that was only a small part of the whole story, but that small part really got people fired up and angry at me. Who knew that would get people fired up?
Anyway, I had an e-mail conversation with one of my readers a few weeks ago and told them there was one final person who was affected by the crash that killed Paul's family. Well, that one last person is about to be introduced and the incident between them is going to be introduced. Can you figure out who it is? I don't think you can.
Once this story is done, I'm going to return to writing. I have been asked to continue with the Paul Ashlee story so I'll try that. I'll try to create a new character who also lost family, but from a female perspective. Lastly, I thought about the two worlds thing again. I even found the author who wrote about it as well and was published. My local library is currently trying to get a copy of one of his books brought in for me to read. I'll let you know when it arrives.
For the grammar police who have written me. Other than trying to write a new story, I also plan on going back to my "Lose One..." story and correct all of the mistakes that you have been so gracious to point out. I have kept all of the e-mail messages I have received and will use them as the basis for my corrections. Be Nice! Yes, my grammar sucks. Yes, Word and Google have failed me. But with your help we can fix it and make it better. We will make it stronger, easier to read and able to jump social boundaries in a single bound. It will become "THE SIX MILLION WORD STORY!"
Take care and have a wonderful 2015.
Two more chapters in the queue for posting. Which by the way may surprise a few people. Hopefully those of you who have ready my story will still enjoy these next few chapters and then the rest of the chapters since we are getting down to the end of this story. Hopefully I didn't ruin it for you.
On a side note. I have picked up a book from the library on literary agents. When I finish the book I may actually reach out to a few of them and test the waters. This could be the beginning of something big... hopefully.
Again, thank you to the good people who have written me letting me know of the flaws in my writing. I will try to fix them and repost the corrected chapters as time goes along. This whole experience has been an eye opener for me.
Take care everyone and be safe over the coming year.
The next two chapters are in the hopper ready to be posted. I hope that they are enjoyable.
The story is drawing to a close and some of the big dramatic confrontations are coming so get ready for it.
I hope that everyone that is reading my story had a great Christmas, mine was good but I'm so tired and ready to get to my day job and out of the house for a while. Family is good, but this much family wears me out. Every been there? Sure you have.
Oh
My
Gosh!
Another Christmas come and gone. I survived! YEAH!!
How much money is too much money to give to a teen? A Wal-Mart gift card worth $100, is that too much money for them to spend on their own at Wal-Mart? It may be and I have a bad feeling about it.
I managed to get all of the wrapping paper picked up, the ham in the crock pot for dinner and now I wait for it to be done. Until then, I'll post a couple of chapters and think about the next book.
Which reminds me, here is part of my idea. We have all heard the Bible story of Adam and Eve, even as children this story is familiar to us. What you say if I said that when the Earth was created in that story that God didn't stop there and created a second Earth just like it but without the serpent around to tempt Eve. Where is this other Earth you ask? Exactly opposite of us in the same solar system that we now reside. Could anyone take that idea and run with it? Maybe? No? Sound too strange to be a story or too preachy? I don't know, this is the strange stuff that floats through my head sometimes.
Merry Christmas everyone and have a safe New Year!
I am starting off this blog post by saying thank you to all of the people who wrote me today. Your words of encouragement and kindness really gave me a list today. You all are amazing! Thank you so much for everything!
Here are three chapters for your reading pleasure. Please enjoy them. I read them all this afternoon just trying to make sure they are as correct as I can make them.
Take care everyone and have a good night.
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