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1:4 now in the queue for posting.
Not much has changed, some vocabulary tweaks to how Luke and Stef speak, and a little more hesitation before they cross the first of many bridges.
All in all, nothing that changes anything that necessitates a re-read unless you are a completionist.
Clee
1:3 is now proofed, tweaked in minor and unimportant ways in terms of plot, and in the queue for uploading.
Clee
Proof-read reposting, with minor and inconsequential edits so, unless you are a completionist reading along with the uploads, nothing changed.
Clee
Repost is queued up.
If you've read it before, there's nothing much changed other than a littly tidying of vocabulary.
Clee
Had a quick look at 1:15 with a view to reposting with the 'correct' ending.
Oh.
Looks like there is a lot more proof-reading needing to be done.
Consequently, I'm going to proof-read the whole of Book One in order before getting into the edits and uploading of Book Two. This is, I know, a delay, but it will mean that I have a much better hold of how my characters act and think and speak going into Book Two, so it will be for the best.
Looking at 1:!5, they seem so young, now, given I know where they are three months later when their lives are a lot more complex.
For now, then, it's time to load up typewriter fonts and coloured backdrops on 1:1...
Cheers...Clee
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