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Well, I finished chapter 28 late last night and it got posted this afternoon. I have another, Chapter 29, ready and it should be posted on SOL, I hope, very soon.
In the latest chapter, Sandy is up to her old tricks, telling everything on everyone. Jim feels a jump to safety at seventy miles an hour on a California Freeway might be his only escape from her parents wrath. But in the end it is Sandy who comes to his rescue and of course follows up with another embarrassing observation.
By the way, Chapter 30 will have a few interesting war stories from Jim's stint in the Army. But if you finished the last two chapters, you already might have already guessed that.
Hope you enjoy. Let me know.
AJ.
Well, chapter 27 is up. So are the critics...LOL.
Anyway, I do appreciate comments and corrections.
Boy did I miss one glaring error! Oh well, "me" is not equal to "you" in anyone's book is it. If you caught that, sorry for the error. Some day I might get a chapter totally correct. Don't hold your breath though.
I've already edited that error and will get it up and running as soon as SOL reposts the chapter.
BTW, I should have Chapter 28 up later tonight. I'll see if I can get that defect free before I post it. Wish me luck.
AJ.
Well, I guess I did fairly well with Chapter 26. At least there hasn't been any yelling and screaming yet that goes on when I make stupid or not so stupid errors typing and/or editing a chapter.
I blew it with Chapter 25. I had to revise it several time before I got it better. I can't say 'right' because there are still a few errors buried in there. They will be corrected when I repost the entire story. Seems I can't spell Claire's name right. I was aghast that I'd done that throughout the story.
Oh, well. I try. Yeah, I know it's success that counts, but with writing there is the editing that makes things better.
AJ.
Well, I just sent that off to SOL. It should be up sometime later today. Things get somewhat different for Claire and Jim and we learn a little about Jim's feelings about Love, Life and Sex. The chapter includes a few thoughts and some actions on the subject of Love and Sex as well from the little nymph Sandy.
Well, it is up and boy, did I mess up again. I can't believe the errors I found after it posted. I spent quite a while checking it and double checking it. Oh well, I'll go over it again and send off a revision to SOL.
Sorry for the errors. I have a feeling everyone will be hearing that a lot from me.
AJ.
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