AJ Martin: Blog

Reviewing my scores for the Bullet, I was quite surprised to find someone rated me with a "2" for Technical. Interesting. Not sure why because I got no indication from any feedback that my words, sentence structure, grammar and the like were totally pitiful.

In grade school you get a "2" if you can spell your name right. I did that when I submitted my story. Spelled my name right. I checked. I'd think the least I could get is a "3" then.

Anyway, I went back and scanned my text, read the story a couple of times trying to figure out what was so offensive that I RATED a "2." I'm clueless.

But I did find a couple of typos. Not a lot, just a few ... less than FIVE! Things that get left when I'm editing. Anyway, I fixed them.

So, if you've read the story, Chapter 3 specifically, try reading it again. I've added some stuff to enhance the story and, well, in my opinion, made it a little better.

At least that's what I think. But who knows, I'm just a "2." Go figure?

AJ.

Well, I've sent off chapter 3 of the story to the posting queue. It should be up with the next set of updates.

If you haven't read the first two chapters, I hope you find my story interesting. It's from a different POV than I've seen before.

For first time readers, I noticed a few errors in the first two chapters. They're all small ones and if you vote, I hope you'll overlook them in your scoring. I'll be reposting the first two chapters, as corrected, later.

AJ.

Claire and Jim relax after an active day. Their bodies merge and when they rest together afterward, their nemesis is right there with them. She has an interesting offer for the pair as they plan their trip to Claire's home.

Needless to say, Chapter 37 is up.

AJ.

BTW, sorry for the one editing mistake near the end of the chapter. It's been corrected. Sometimes I just can't see the trees in the forest.

For those who have been asking for a little faster posting, I took some time today to put together Chapter 36. It's in the posting queue and should be up and running in a while.

More fun at the beach and a few revelations about the whole clan. Plus there's more than a little surprise at the end of the chapter. I hope you enjoy the chapter.

AJ.

Note: The chapter is up and running now. I found three small errors and have corrected them. They will be posted when SOL does their next update.

Well, I just finished Chapter 35 and sent it off to the posting queue.

Jim and Claire, along with Sandy and her family, have fun in the surf of Carmel Beach. The scantily clad women look delicious.

Jim has a little problem caused by the women with him that Claire solves for him in an interesting way. (Or did she make it worse?) See for yourself.

Hope you like the chapter. Enjoy.

AJ.