AJ Martin: Blog

Mea Culpa! or in English, Ooops!

Well, I apologize again to my readers. I continually try to post clean text but somehow, my brain just doesn't catch everything, no matter how hard I try. So, as I read the posted text on SOL I found a couple of errors I'd missed.

Well, that led to finding some things that could be added to enhance the story. (Of at least I hope did so.) So after a few hours of revisions, VOILA, another revision is now up.

I think this revision or Chapter 7 is better or at least I'm deluding myself into believeing that. So, if you read this Blog entry and already read Chapter 7, a re-read might just be interesting as there is a lot more information about Spirits' origins.

Just one final note: The newest revision, as I said, is up and running. It's fairly clean although I did make a couple of errors with quotes. In editing the prior text I left a couple out and once I typed a single for a double.

They are easy to ignore. I'll leave things as they are for now. When I send through an entire story update, they will be included in the corrections and additions I make to the story.

AJ.

My apologies to anyone who waded through Chapter 7 already or at least before I was able to correct some spelling errors and a few other things. I've sent off an update.

I did get knocked with a bunch or 7's for that. I still feel that a few errors and a scoring of 7 is a little severe.

In a grading environment, 65 is passing. That would be a D in my book. A 7 would be a C-, barely passing. Like I said, is my work so bad that it deserves just a barely passing mark? It makes me wonder.

What do you think?

AJ.

Well, Chapter 7 is in the posting queue. It should be up during the next round of updates.

Will has made a couple of friends since his death and he is starting to get used to his new reality. Both Valerie and Marilyn clue him in more on being a Spirit. The big question still looms: Who killed him and why?

AJ.

Well, Chapter 41 is in the posting queue. With a little luck it will be up and running with the next set of updates.

The chapter starts with Jim and Claire ready to leave for Reno. After collecting Sandy to ride with them they head out on the first leg of hopefully their life-long trip together.

Thanks to everyone for your continuing support and comments. I hope you like this addition to the story.

AJ.

Chapter 6 is in the posting queue. The plot thickens as Will learns more of the WHY he was killed from the 'fly on the wall.'

Enjoy.

AJ.