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It's been submitted to the Posting queue,
It's the Adoption Service that Page Judith is having difficulty sitting through. John is by her side as the child is given to an adoptive couple.
I've made many needed corrections to Chapter 14.
My apologies to anyone who already read Chapter 14. I messed up and posted a working version rather then the final version. The end must have confused many. Sorry.
Basically the Chapter is not much different except disjointed paragraphs, which were notes for Chapter 15 were accidentally attached to the end.
The extra garbage has been removed. Sorry.
AJ.
Well, Bullet is completed and up and running on SOL.
I've enjoyed developing this concept and perhaps another episode might just find itself in the works later.
In any event, I hope readers have had as much fun reading this tale of mine as I did creating it. I also hope they will forgive me for the many errors that sneaked in along the way. I've corrected all that I found, along with the ones many readers passed on too. I do appreciate comments, suggestions and their help.
Hope you enjoyed it.
AJ.
Think Submission Queue and send a thought transfer to the Moderator ... Check it!
Sorry, I couldn't resist.
Will and his friends are searching the ninth floor of Randolph Industries where he hits pay dirt. The others come running to find out what the excitement is all about. The mastermind of the Will's demise is a shocker for everyone. What happens next can be anybody's guess.
AJ.
It's up in the submission queue awaiting posting.
John is taken by Page Judith for an afternoon romp in the pool and is confronted by a hoard of very inquisitive hands that just can't get enough of him. More about the way things go at the Convent is revealed and the way they go about attracting male students for their schools.
AJ
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