The Undertaker by Bad Line Ghoul


Description: For every line, paragraph, and idea that lives to be published, a dozen others are stillborn. But what happens to their bodies? (Note: This is a hard story to tag. Read the warning at the beginning of the story for possible squick alert.)
Size: 15 KB ( ~ 2,844 words)
Type: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Humor, Double Penetration

Review by ausie-import   [other reviews by ausie-import]

Reviewed: 2014-07-10



OK, it was fairly funny.

Thank god I don't know "Bow Bow". Sounds like the sort of music that people here call "Doof Doof", as in the sound that one hears near a car with a 3kW sound system.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 7