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When a Wish Comes True, Watch Out! by Rolf

Author's Description:
"Those who have nothing shall inherit the world, et cetera." This story spans many times and places, each of which would change human history would the outcome of events be different. Pete and Kathy will find out though that different is not always better. Join us now, your thoughts, if not your body will also be transported as our would be heroes endeavor to save humanity from eventual destruction. Or, will their actions only bring that about sooner. We shall see? 2nd POV added
Size: 22 KB ( ~ 4,172 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Polygamy/Polyamory, Slow, Caution, 2nd POV, Violent, Military

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2014-07-01

If it wasn't for bad luck he'd have no luck at all.

Pete stepped on a land mine and lost both his legs.His pension went nowhere, and his only ray of sunshine in the rundown trailer park was a fourteen year old child beaten up by her mother's boy friend, who decided that he was her owner.

And the worse of it was she loved this strange crippled ex-soldier for how he treated this young waif. And then came the storm to end all storms, and he listened in on the weirdest conversation ever.

No fierce love making. No sudden wealth. No magical regeneration of his missing limbs. Just 'crunch time' when he was asked that Soul Burning Question. Enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10