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Author's Description:
A boy and his baby sitter grow up together and fall in love.
Size: 91 KB (18,023 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Black Female, White Male, Oral Sex, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed:


Like most stories, this one has some good points and some bad points.

On the negative hand, it seems a bit stilted and can be jarring. There's almost no use of slang, except for one repeated phrase I noticed. The narrator tends to jump around a bit in time, which can be a bit confusing. Due, I hope, to the short nature of this, all but one of the characters seems flat; unfortunately, that character is in a strong supporting role.

All that said, however, I rather enjoyed this story. I suppose it was just charming. I really don't have reasons I can list for liking it as much as I did, but if you want a bit of odd interracial romance, this is a good place to find it. Plus, it doesn't hurt that the main characters are good people, if a bit flat.

--Manny

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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