This may not be the most accurate review, as the posting schedule was long and erratic, but I'll give it my best shot.
The rapidity with which the main characters fall in love and get married requires a lot of suspension of disbelief. It was shorter than I hoped for. The ending was fairly predictable.
Lots of little details and plot elements making the ending more believable and realistic. Lots of good one-liners and jokes. Good, if compressed, plot. Consistently interesting.
The Last Call:
Aside from it being shorter than I hoped, this seemed right up my alley. However, for reasons I can't put my finger on, it failed to grab me. It's still worth a read, anbd isn't so long as to be a large time investment, so if you like Oyster 50, romantic stories, or guns, give this a read.