Road Rash by oyster50

Author's Description:
Chuck's on the road going home. It's amazing the things one might find on the side of the road. Like Jen, a bit bent, but not broken.
Size: 273 KB ( ~ 51,769 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Cream Pie, Slow

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed: 2014-12-31

This may not be the most accurate review, as the posting schedule was long and erratic, but I'll give it my best shot.

The Bad:

The rapidity with which the main characters fall in love and get married requires a lot of suspension of disbelief. It was shorter than I hoped for. The ending was fairly predictable.

The Good:

Lots of little details and plot elements making the ending more believable and realistic. Lots of good one-liners and jokes. Good, if compressed, plot. Consistently interesting.

The Last Call:

Aside from it being shorter than I hoped, this seemed right up my alley. However, for reasons I can't put my finger on, it failed to grab me. It's still worth a read, anbd isn't so long as to be a large time investment, so if you like Oyster 50, romantic stories, or guns, give this a read.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 7