Right Under Your Nose by Sid Emmet

Description: John decides to turn over a new leaf and his best friend Anna wants to help. What happens next surprises them both. Sometimes what you most need is right under your nose. A slow starting romantic love story with some D/s thrown in for good measure.
Size: 239 KB ( ~ 45,321 words)
Type: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Fiction, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Light Bond, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Exhibitionism

Review by barron of ideas   [other reviews by barron of ideas]

Reviewed: 2015-03-17

I have to stop reading new stories, at least ones that just finished. I got another ten and I already used my ten for March. Its possible you might not agree, if very light bondage and domination and submission are one of your squicks, but its basically a very well done love story, where a guy and girl who have been friends for 20 years, since grade school finally find out they love each other. It takes nearly 20 chapters to get to the stroke part of the story, and it ends pretty soon after that, but its hot and when it isn't hot, its still entertaining, with real characters. I think you will like it, I know I did.

The plot is fine but nothing the reader couldn't figure out pretty early in the story. Boy finds girl, boy gets girl big time. It might have been a little slow to get to the good stuff. I didn't see any technical problems but I wasn't in editor mode and I might have missed something. Since I am going to use a ten for appeal to reviewer, I'll use a nine for technical quality. I am not sure some of the described positions are possible. I did find some interesting statements in the Author's Profile. He is a white color guy in a blue color background. If he were a blue color guy he could be an alien. I like his recommended stories, too.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10