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Use It or Lose It by Tedbiker

Author's Description:
Geoff Brown's long-term partner walks away, leaving him depressed and demoralised. His boss sends him to the doctor, telling him not to come back to work without the doctor's approval. The doctor's response is to sign him off work with a list of instructions, concluding 'Use it, or lose it."
Size: 65 KB ( ~ 12,326 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Slow

Review by Derek Smith   [other reviews by Derek Smith]

Reviewed: 2014-03-11

All of Ted's stories have one thing in common; they are always well written and make good use of the English language. Some, like this one, are written in what I think of as Ted's 'chatty style'. The reader could almost be sitting in a quiet pub or café, listening to him telling the story over a pint of good ale or a cup of coffee.

Ted has picked a slightly different plot, populated it with well portrayed characters and made it all believable.

I would have liked it to be longer, to prolong my enjoyment, but like all good stories, it came to the end where it logically should.

Well done Mr. Biker and thank you very much.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9