Life With Alpha II: Alpha's World by Any Pseudonym

Author's Description:
Following the events in Life with Alpha, the existence of computer intelligence is now public and the world is changing. Alpha's creator continues to create artificial women based on fictional characters, but his purpose expands to encompass the fate of the world and whether self-aware computers will be treated as slaves or equals to man. Or for that matter, whether there will be a war between the races.
Size: 1025 KB ( ~ 194,370 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Mind Control, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Fan Fiction, Science Fiction, Robot, Superhero, Light Bond, Harem, Interracial, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex

Review by Ivan_Ronical   [other reviews by Ivan_Ronical]

Reviewed: 2013-09-02

So once in a while, I check the "New Stories" page. You know, just in case. I'll admit that this doesn't often pay off in the form of a review, let alone in my discovery of something that I've been waiting a long time for, but today was a lucky day for me.

It's no secret that I greatly enjoyed the start to Any Pseudonym's saga of Frank and Alpha--I reviewed it favorably and cited Alpha as one of my favorite characters. I have great news to any other fans out there: AP hasn't lost his touch. Even though it's only the prologue and first chapter out so far (placeholder review #2!), it's plain that the cast is back in full force, and that they're all operating as expected. The downside, so far, is that there isn't enough Alpha, but there's a saying that goes "you've got to eat your vegetables before you can have dessert", or something.

There isn't "much" written yet, where much in this case is defined as already being longer than the majority of the stories on SOL, but there's a huge amount of potential, as well as foreshadowing and hints of events to come. Frank's typical over explanations and parenthetical are constant (and often humorous), and he's even adding more girls to his ever-expanding harem right at the start.

I think the biggest improvements so far over the original work would be:

* Technical quality, which is damn near perfect by SOL standards
* Acknowledgement of the nonstop sex scenes and a focus on making them more unique (though obviously, being only the start of this story it's hard to tell if the trend will continue)

I applaud AP's continued creativity, especially with regard to the staged scenarios which are set up for each new cast member. Hilarious, character-based humor all around, and I'm not ashamed to admit that I had some good belly laughs.

Read "Life With Alpha", then read this, then keep reading this as it gets posted.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10