Jessica's Storm by Dak0ta52

Description: The first winter storm of the season brings neighbors together. A single man living alone in the mountains and a young girl who has been hidden away from her past.
Size: 176 KB ( ~ 33,375 words)
Type: Drama
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/ft, Consensual, Romantic, First, Safe Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-09-02

Though I found Jessica's Storm to be a little Spartan and formulaic, don't let that put you off. I'm pretty sure that if Dak0ta52 had made the effort, he could have made much more of his main protagonists, but even as it is, it's a great story. I particularly enjoyed the ending, and its promise for the future.

Grammatically the story is good, but it would benefit from a more stringent editing regime. There aren't enough errors to make for difficult reading, the ones that are there are distracting, but appear to be more the result of carelessness than lack of knowledge.

Jessica's Storm could have been labelled 'Romance' rather than 'Drama', but whatever genre it's posted under, it really is a good story. Gently erotic rather than 'in your face' pornographic, it will make a welcome addition to anyone's library, and is well worth reading more than once.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10