Katy by Tedbiker


Description: His father came home from the army, bringing the widow of his best mate and her daughter. They grew up together like brother and sister...
Size: 17 KB ( ~ 3,224 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Heterosexual, Farming, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, First, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-09-05


Katy is well up to Tedbiker's usual standards. Technically flawless to the best of my knowledge, I was almost tempted to score it ten for technical quality, but nothing is ever perfect. The story stands on its own, and, although the plot is fairly unoriginal, and a little predictable, this tale is well worth reading.

I do have a grumble though, we learn nothing of the relationship of the parents of the main protagonists. I appreciate that adding that to the story would probably have doubled, or tripled its length, but it would have been worth it. Maybe Tedbiker plans to write that as a whole different story, or maybe not, but the lack of that addition to the tale left me a little dissatisfied.

If, as an author, I was half as good, and half as prolific as Tedbiker I would be a very happy old Gnome. Katy is an excellent story, and I recommend that you add it to your library, along with the rest of Tedbiker's work, so you can read it again and again.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10