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Guardian Angel by DeYaKen

Author's Description:
When two damaged people find each other on a beach can they ever rebuild their shattered lives
Size: 103 KB ( ~ 19,532 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Ghost, Cheating, Revenge, Oral Sex

Review by peregrinf   [other reviews by peregrinf]

Reviewed: 2013-07-27

This is a story of betrayal, recovery, redemption and revenge, along with a touch of the supernatural. It is well worth reading, right through to a very satisfying ending.

There's not a lot of sex, but it is tastefully done (pun intended).

There are a few technical boo boos, most of them dealing with punctuation, a comma where there should be a period, a misplaced apostrophe. They're jarring but the story and characters are engrossing enough to keep you reading.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10