It's Against the Law by Laptopwriter


Description: Dalton is devastated by his wife's infidelity and seeks revenge. Now, can he rebuild his life; will he ever find true happiness again?
Size: 180 KB ( ~ 34,133 words)
Type: Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Cheating, BDSM

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-06-27


For some odd reason, this is the second 'cheating wife' story I've reviewed in the last two days. The odd reason, I realise, is that it's not a genre that I'm very fond of (that's why it only scores 9 for 'Appeal To Reviewer'), and I usually skip cheating wife type stories. I'm glad I didn't skip this one though.

By using the premise that adultery is illegal as the basis for the plot, 'LW' has managed to take a slightly different slant on the cheating wife story. Because of that though It's Against the Law should probably have the new 'Revenge' tag added to the description to ensure accuracy.

Technically the story isn't too bad, but it does have more than a smattering of the usual homophones, 'peak' instead of 'peek' for instance. The grammar and punctuation however, is much better than average. My suggestion to 'LW' is that he links up with a good editor, or at least, a proofreader!

Having said all that, I have to say that It's Against the Law is an excellent story, and well worth adding to your library, particularly if you're into revenge on cheating wives.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9