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Grace Jensen Debauched by Tomken

Author's Description:
Twins Angie and Andy gently lead their mother down the slippery slope.
Size: 157 KB ( ~ 29,772 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/ft, Incest, First, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Slow

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-08-11

Grace Jensen Debauched is another one of those stories I nearly missed. What put me off was the word 'debauched' in the title. It's silly, I know, but to me the word induced visions of a porn video type story, all meaningless sex, and less than sparkling prose.

Nothing could have been further from the truth! Grace isn't debauched, she's seduced, and the prose is well written with few errors. If you're looking for a 'quick one off the wrist', look elsewhere. Grace Jensen Debauched is erotic without being 'in your face', and is an excellent story.

If I have one complaint, it's that I think the ending could have been milked a little more, if milked is the right term, but the defloration scene was beautiful.

Almost as an aside, Tomken deals with incest in a way that conforms closely to my own beliefs. Love can't be wrong, wherever it raises its head, only compulsion is wrong, mutual desire is fine. As the Pagans/Wiccans say, "An it harms none, do what you will!"

Grace Jensen Debauched is a great story!

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10