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Naked in the Spring by Jacqueline Jillinghoff

Author's Description:
The weather is getting warmer, and Danielle is dying to get back outside without her clothes on. Her parents disapprove, but there's nothing they can do to stop her.
Size: 32 KB ( ~ 6,068 words)
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Stroke Story
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Incest, Mother, Father, Daughter, FemaleDom, Water Sports, Exhibitionism

Review by peregrinf   [other reviews by peregrinf]

Reviewed: 2013-05-10 - (Review Updated: 2013-05-10)

Jacqueline Jillinghoff may be the only author on SOL who would even dare to open a story with a quote from Walt Whitman, one that works perfectly with the piece.

This is one of JJ's little gems in her Danielle series. Danielle likes to get naked -- in public where she might get caught clothes-less. She's gotten naked in school (no, this is not part of the Naked in School universe) but now spring is here and she wants to get naked outside, only Daddy's made her promise not to.

To say that JJ captures Danielle's "voice" perfectly is understatement:

"I kept my promise to Daddy for a whole week, which I think was pretty good, but finally I had to give in. It was nighttime, though, so I told myself it didn't count."

The atmosphere, the feel of the story is perfect. You'll feel what Danielle is feeling -- the sights, the sounds, the scents, and the delicious wickedness of daring to venture out into the night, where Danielle makes an interesting discovery about herself.

It is short, it is sweet, and it is hot, a superb addition to JJ's collection.

I don't seem to have the opportunity to give it a Stroke value, but if I could it would be a 10+.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10