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Lauren and Bonnie by Coaster2

Author's Description:
Zach's wife gets a job and the consequences are drastic to their marriage.
Size: 46 KB ( ~ 8,723 words)
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa

Review by funkso   [other reviews by funkso]

Reviewed: 2013-05-02

Zach has a loving marriage with his wife, as their sons grow up though she starts to look outside the family to develop herself and takes on a job and her priorities shift.

Lauren and Bonnie is a short story about family, and setting priorities and expectations, and what should be important.

It's a good, short read and worth the time to appreciate the storytelling inside it.

Plot: 6 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6