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Author's Description:
When John comes across Kathy in a truck stop in the early morning hours, She needs help and he needs healing, maybe they can help each other. But first she has to learn to trust and he needs to learn to express himself. This is not a stroke story, it will take time to get to know the characters. Codes will be added as the story progresses.
Size: 231 KB (44,872 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Romantic, NonConsensual, Rape, Heterosexual, First, Masturbation, Voyeurism, Nudism

Review by oyster50   [other reviews by oyster50]

Reviewed:


My kind of story. The male protagonist is considerate, caring, sane, and within limits, moral. The young lady is the victim of bad events, vulnerable, and intelligent. The pace of the story is measured, giving the reader time to see thoughts and feelings and to actually start caring about the characters as people instead of the carriers for hyperactive genitalia.

I write stories like this, and I really enjoy reading stories like this on the rare occasion that they show up.

The writer is competent at his craft, giving the reader very few technical errors to impede the enjoyment of the tale.

I do hope this is not his last effort.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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