The Road to Hell by WDtales


Description: Vladic has a family secret. Sometimes its a gift, sometimes its a curse. Either way it keeps life interesting for Vladic. This is fiction and written by me alone.
Size: 48 KB ( ~ 9,102 words)
Type: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: mt/ft, Consensual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Humor, Extra Sensory Perception

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-02-11


I nearly passed this story by, I'm not really into the vampire genre, I mostly find it too ridiculous for words. The Road to Hell though, is not your common or garden vampire story.

Technically, the story isn't too bad, the usual faux pas, such as the mixing up of to, too, and two, have been avoided. On the other hand, the editing is somewhat sloppy, and there are quite a few missing words that make nonsense of the sentences in which they should appear.

The plot is unique enough to grab the reader's attention, and hold it until the end. If I have a real criticism of the story, it's that it's too short, and the ending a little unsatisfactory.

Having said all that, this is a great story, and I enjoyed it immensely. I can unequivocally recommend it to you, dear reader, and urge you to add it to your library! I'm off to see what else 'WDtales' has to offer.

Read and enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10