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Author's Description:
The weeks and months just after the end of world war two.
Size: 38 KB (7,500 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Squirting, Water Sports, Exhibitionism

Review by richardshagrin   [other reviews by richardshagrin]

Reviewed:


This is a good story. I found it browsing for something to read. The author's pen name Werewolf caught my interest. If it had been Vampire or Zombie I wouldn't have looked. There are some other stories using Aftermath and it always seemed to me the answer to that question would be recess, or maybe lunch. Nobody would schedule a difficult class after math.

This story is short, three chapters, but has romance, sex, and the hero getting the Victoria Cross and a German girl who will be his wife. We meet the girl's brother who was a POW in England and the hero's family. It ends after the medal ceremony at Buckingham Palace, going to sleep after the end of a long day, but with the feeling things will go well for them all in the future.

The plot is nothing elaborate, just enough to support the story. Lets give it a seven, its better than average for the length of the story. Technically its pretty good, I didn't see any errors. Lets call it an eight. Appeal to reviewer, I liked it. Lets give it an eight, which is an A in my six is a C, average, seven is a B (above average) and eight is an A, good, grading system. Nine is an A plus and ten is at most once a month WOW!

I like to look around for gems or at least costume jewelry to recommend that haven't been reviewed before and deserve your attention. I don't see this edging onto a top fifty list, but I am glad I read it. Its a feel good story.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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