Stone Inc by Cold Creek

Author's Description:
Ben Stone has just turned sixteen, the age when Stone males are considered men. He is the ninth generation of the Stone family to join the family company and starts to learn the secrets and benefits of being a Stone.
Size: 230 KB ( ~ 43,615 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, mt/Fa, Consensual, First, Oral Sex, Workplace, School

Review by funkso   [other reviews by funkso]

Reviewed: 2014-06-23

I've recently been trawling the site search engine for stories that I might be interested in and this one really shone through for me...

I do enjoy a good "Do Over" story, and the site seems to have plenty - but what I really enjoy is the coming of age story of a guy who is going to be successful, who has a lot going for them, and something upbeat and fun.

This story hits major home runs in that department.

Ben Stone has just turned sixteen and with it inherits a legacy of the Stone family business. He's wealthy, he's blessed and he's got an office in a powerful company. Along with it he gets a sexy as hell personal assistant, and some confidence to start living up to his potential.

Unfortunately, at present this is a discontinued story, while Cold Creek continues with his Defenceman saga (which I haven't read, because... sports...). Given how great that story scores, and the love others have for it I'm sure continuing that would be a priority for a lot of lovers of CC's writing... but I just loved this as the beginning of a tale.

It's such a great start, and such great potential I was very disappointed by its end.

Read it and I hope you can be disappointed too... in a good way.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10