People Can Change by DeYaKen


Description: Greg Maitland thought he was coping quite well with civillian life. He had a business that just about kept it's head above water. A lovely wife and two beautiful children. His life is perfect, until he finds his wife is a star on Gang Banged Wives. Something like that can do things to a man.
Size: 157 KB ( ~ 29,772 words)
Type: Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fan Fiction, Cheating, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Anal Sex

Review by funkso   [other reviews by funkso]

Reviewed: 2013-06-17


Greg Maitland is a guy who has a lot on his plate - he hasn't been out of the Marines long, he's got a business that is just getting by, a wife that is drawing away a little, and he's just found a website that shows his wife performing a gangbang.

His temper gets the best of him and he roughly manhandles her throwing her out, leading to him being arrested. His life can only go uphill from here, right?

This was a ripper of a story - there are twists that take what you see and move them to another angle, which moves the plot, and conflicts the people in interesting ways.

Did Julie cheat on Greg and was that her? What else is driving them apart? Can Greg overcome his anger and if he fights can he get his life back together?

And just when you think you've got a handle on it, in comes something to make the situation more complex, and then more complex.

I really enjoyed it, and one of the really great things - like the name of the story proposes - the people in the story really do change, and grow, and your perception of them changes slightly as well.

A very interesting story, and a very great finish.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9