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Perchance to Dream by FantasyLover

Author's Description:
Stressed archaeologist seeks help from an unusual source by trying an ancient ritual--with unusual results.
Size: 219 KB ( ~ 41,529 words)
Genre: Mind Control
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Fa/Fa, ft/ft, Fa/ft, Mult, Consensual, Magic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Cream Pie

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2012-02-25

I was disappointed in Perchance To Dream! Why was I disappointed? Because it ended, that's why! I would have been quite happy to read another ten chapters.

Technically the story wasn't too bad, there were quite a few typos, and a few missing words, but the text was blessedly free of the usual basic errors, FantasyLover obviously has a decent command of English.

The plot was unusual enough to draw me in, and once drawn in I was hooked. I did get the feeling that there could have been more, that the author could have gone into greater detail without spoiling the story, but even so, it was a good read. As I say, another ten chapters would have been good.

This is definitely one for the library, read and enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10