I was disappointed in Perchance To Dream! Why was I disappointed? Because it ended, that's why! I would have been quite happy to read another ten chapters.
Technically the story wasn't too bad, there were quite a few typos, and a few missing words, but the text was blessedly free of the usual basic errors, FantasyLover obviously has a decent command of English.
The plot was unusual enough to draw me in, and once drawn in I was hooked. I did get the feeling that there could have been more, that the author could have gone into greater detail without spoiling the story, but even so, it was a good read. As I say, another ten chapters would have been good.
This is definitely one for the library, read and enjoy!