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The Wanderer and His First Slave by Dancing Shadows

Author's Description:
This is a fantasy story filled with mighty creatures, wicked sorcerers, magical weapons, and of course beautiful women with long shining hair and a true Hero, controlling his women with an iron fist. Well, apart from the fact that he's not very heroic, and that the women mostly use their cunning ways to disobey him when they do not outright turn the tables on him...
Size: 66 KB ( ~ 12,516 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Magic, Slavery, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, DomSub, MaleDom, FemaleDom

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2012-02-24

So, you have been charged with saving a slave by buying her, and ...You have also been charged with defeating a Fire disciple. Except the newly bought slave is really a sorceress whose magic is, like Samson, in her hair, and she doesn't believe she really is a slave. But they reaally do like each other, even if he is a wimp, a stupid wimp, so there you have it.

I was told by a Professor some many moons ago that it was not the story but the telling that really counts, and this really proves his point of view.

I wait patiently for Book two.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9