Pete's life falls apart when his wife leaves him, and then the plot gets ALL twisty. We have the sexy neighbor. We have the sexy neighbor's whacko former boyfriend. We have a fourteen year old daughter who's just finding out about that whole 'sex' thing. We have the daughter's nerdy first boyfriend.
Canary takes a grab-bag of classic plots and tosses them together in a bowl and comes up with a great story, then leaves us with a teasing 'to be continued'.
It's not exactly a stroke story, but I don't need stroke stories. It could use a little proofreading, but ignore that and read this enjoyable and promising little work.