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Author's Description:
Pete has almost a complete meltdown when his wife of fourteen years just up and leaves.
Size: 162 KB (32,440 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Incest
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Consensual, Romantic, Incest, Father, Daughter, First, Safe Sex

Review by oyster50   [other reviews by oyster50]

Reviewed:


Pete's life falls apart when his wife leaves him, and then the plot gets ALL twisty. We have the sexy neighbor. We have the sexy neighbor's whacko former boyfriend. We have a fourteen year old daughter who's just finding out about that whole 'sex' thing. We have the daughter's nerdy first boyfriend.

Canary takes a grab-bag of classic plots and tosses them together in a bowl and comes up with a great story, then leaves us with a teasing 'to be continued'.

It's not exactly a stroke story, but I don't need stroke stories. It could use a little proofreading, but ignore that and read this enjoyable and promising little work.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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