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The Glow of Motherhood by Cor

Author's Description:
Kathy was in the ninth month of her first pregnancy. She was at home on maternity leave and bored. Before lunch, Kathy decided to have a shower. It was a warm day and none of her maternity clothes ever really fit well, not even her underwear. So she figured since no one was around she could go without clothes, After checking and double-checking that all the blinds were closed, Kathy dropped her towel and stood there nude for the first time. All of a sudden, there was a knock at the door...
Size: 91 KB ( ~ 17,256 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Slow, Nudism

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2012-02-01

Despite the fact that I'm just a grumpy old fart, I really liked this story. OK, I know it's not very macho to feel any sort of emotional response to motherhood, and childbirth, but frankly my dear, I don't give a shi ... damn!

Looking at it from a man's point of view, I've always had this sneaking suspicion that women do indeed have a secret sisterhood that supports them in their hour of need. Let's be honest about it, too many men do a pretty crappy job of it! I also have to say that I found the childbirth scenes quite emotional, and well written.

Technically, the story's pretty good, though the editing could have been a little tighter it doesn't detract too much from the flow of the tale. What I did find irritating though, were the repeated episode numbers, they are irrelevant and unnecessary, especially so close together.

I felt that there could have been much more to this tale than there actually was, Maybe Cor can develop this into a 'Sisterhood Universe' I wouldn't mind following it anyway.

If you want a stroke story, this isn't it, but it definitely makes you feel good, read, and enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10