Klutz by MisguidedChild


Description: Can someone be so clumsy that she is dangerous to everyone around her? Susan is. She is known as Miss Disaster and is considered a force of nature. What happens when this force of nature meets the immovable object? Do opposites really attract? Klutz is a love story. There is no real sex in part 1 but since sex is an important part of human nature, sex is talked about and insinuated but isn’t necessary for part 1.
Size: 518 KB ( ~ 98,228 words)
Type: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Humor

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2012-01-18 - (Review Updated: 2012-07-13)


Well, according to MisguidedChild, this is his first foray into the genre of romantic comedy, and I for one, certainly hope it won't be his last.

This is a playful romp, with a bad enough baddy to keep a little bit of tension in the tale. The characters are believable, and come across as warm and funny people, even if they are only a product of MC's imagination.

The text is unfortunately not free of the usual faux pas, this guy doesn't know the difference between 'to'.'two', and 'too'!

Please read this story, it's fun, funny, entertaining, and will leave you with a warm and fuzzy feeling when, all too soon, it ends.

Enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10