A Late Arrival by John McDonnell


Description: Alice has never driven a car before, but she steals a car and drives off in a blizzard and finds a most enchanting and mysterious diner.
Size: 7 KB ( ~ 1,327 words)
Type: Flash
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Tear Jerker, DoOver, Paranormal, Slow

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2011-09-05


This is a very nice totally predictable story about Alice who leaves her Nursing Home, steals an SUV and drives off into a blizzard, only to end up in a railcar diner full of people she knew from way back when, predictably. Even so, there is a certain freshness to the tale which makes it very, very readable.

However if you are looking for a stroke story, this aint it!

Enjoy.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8