Betrayal by michael-wolfam


Description: Eagles Landing, Colorado, harbors a viciously guarded secret: a sophisticated smuggling ring, which takes advantage of the rules protecting the wealthy from searches. Liv Driscol is a waitress whose passion for cars, inherited from her missing covert-operative father, turns deadly when a joyride becomes a race for her life. An accidental murder witness, she is now being hunted.
Size: 462 KB ( ~ 87,609 words)
Type: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Oriental Female

Review by Riceeyes   [other reviews by Riceeyes]

Reviewed: 2011-04-26


After a hard day at work, Liv takes off for the windy mountain roads with her sports car to relax. During her ride her car overheats but she knows where a mountain stream is where she can get some water to cool it down. When she gets there she witnesses a murder and is noticed. The rest of the story is how she is tracked down and how she responds to being chased/hunted.

This was an excellent action story the type that is hard to put down once you start it. A good plot and good interaction between the characters. Lots of humor with flirting banter between two of the main characters. The pace of the action reminds me of a “Die Hard” movie.

Highly recommended. I am looking forward to the sequel. One off screen sex encounter, no other sex.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10