A Novice Sorceress by Vlfouquet


Description: A young girl get a copy of Abrigal Silverlock book Here a Geas, There a Geas, Everywhere a geas, geas, geas. This book will tunr life upside down, inside out. As she journey deeper into Abrigal world, the stranger her own life will be. As those around her learn Dont Mess with the new witch in town.
Size: 216 KB ( ~ 40,960 words)
Type: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fa/ft, Magic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Horror, Humor, Paranormal

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2011-06-28


Vlfouquet has made no attempts to Edit, or proof read hie or her works. It seems to me that English is the Author's second language, and from the name French is his birth language.

Now, spelling aside, this is really a fun tale of magic in a world where there are truly gods and goddesses. The heroine is a young girl who is given a book of magic by her older brother, and she soon becomes an adept, not only in Magic but in the Martial Arts. So forget about all of the bad sentences, the terrible misspelled words, and enjoy this story, and hope that Vlfouquet learns English as she is spoke.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 1 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10