Whoppers by BrotherJohn

Description: Jealous husband has wife investigated to see if she is cheating. The investigator advises husband how to keep wife from becoming blackmailed into a terrible situation where he couldn't in good conscience keep her. Skip and Brenda can't cook, but John can. Everyone gets what they deserve. Again a try for a little humor.
Size: 26 KB ( ~ 4,930 words)
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Lesbian, Heterosexual

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2011-11-01

What a refreshing change, a story where a husband saves his potentially erring wife, rather than destroying her. The one reservation that I have, is that the story isn't long enough, maybe we can persuade BrotherJohn to to rewrite and expand it. Anyway, that's beside the point, this is one of few stories where I've scored ten for both plot and appeal.

Read it and enjoy!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10