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Author's Description:
Can you see past the surface? Bill learns to see past pink hair and piercings; Lexie learns not all men are out to use her.
Size: 71 KB (13,538 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Heterosexual, Light Bond, Slow

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed:


This is a slow, gentle story of love and redemption. Though not exactly a 'tear jerker', it does tend to affect the reader emotionally, so if you're a bit emotional, keep the Kleenex handy!

Technically the story is pretty good, only a few typos that don't really detract from the telling of the tale, and none of the basic errors lots of SOL authors perpetrate on an unsuspecting public.

This story is worth reading for the 'feel good factor' alone. If you're looking for stroke, this isn't it, if you're looking for a good story, read and enjoy!

Highly recommended!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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