You Don't Need to Wave a Card... by Thinking Horndog

Description: Scott Harshman finally gets his CAP card -- but discovers that you don't have to wave the thing under someone's nose to get in trouble over being sponsor-grade! A Swarm Cycle story
Size: 435 KB ( ~ 82,489 words)
Type: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Drunk/Drugged, Slavery, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Science Fiction, Space, Cheating, Light Bond, Harem, Interracial, Black Female, White Male, White Female, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Pregnancy, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, BBW, Body Modification, Military

Review by bill9900   [other reviews by bill9900]

Reviewed: 2016-08-26

This is a well-written story in the Swarm Cycle universe created by author Thinking Horndog.

The main characters - Scott, Rachel, and Shannon - are well defined, and the story develops nicely as it moves along.

This is nothing like some of the rape-oriented pickup stories; there's an actual story, not just a bunch of heavy D/S vignettes.

The story deserves its rating as one of the better stories in this universe. It's very readable and there are minimal typos, so if you are interested in finding additional stories in this universe after reading the highest-rated ones, this will fill the bill.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9